Torn Heart

She gathered her heart
on a lymb of urgency,
while he scattered the path
of deminishing mercery.
Scooping the day
up in a painful dust,
she withered away
from his heart of rust.
Her love was left behind
but only to love again,
as he took their love
and chocked it to the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 10, 2012 at 5:45 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Donna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Jefferson Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Great write, and rather easy to interpurt. I enjoyed reading it. I do hope however this wasnt a personal experience...
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