Torn Dungarees

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In alleys devoid of light; teenagers sleep on the street. And fear arrives late at night; to feed upon their conceit. Delusions exchanged for lies, they panhandle in the park. And tears trickle from young eyes; watching hunger carve its mark. Drugs ease their physical pain; not their frustration and doubt. For their monsters can't be slain; on the fringes of burnout. Scrounging in torn dungarees; youth confronts brutality. And fragmented memories are lost to reality. As hypocrisy walks by, some street teens barely survive. And if fledgling birds can't fly, can they ever feel alive?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/16/2018 4:48:00 PM
Great poem about harsh reality of struggling teens. Leaves us wondering about type of future they have in store.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 12:52:00 AM
You see what so many don't Emile and you express this truth so well - Lindsay
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Date: 1/9/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, that is a compliment I will share with you, you are a gifted poet, my friend. Emile.
Date: 1/5/2016 5:09:00 PM
excellent write Emile...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thanks White Sage, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/4/2016 10:08:00 PM
Wonderful poem Emile. Beautifully constructed and powerful story.
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Date: 1/5/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Howard, I truly appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/4/2016 2:22:00 PM
Those of us who have never been on the streets too often take for granted what we have. Nicely written, Emile.
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate both your visits and your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/4/2016 11:33:00 AM
such a deep write. SKAT
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate both your visits and your comments. Emile.
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