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Tiny Devils leaking out of my pen, running over the page Hell bent on desolation, DEATH and destruction All Love, Friendship, Kindness, slaughtered in Rage A temple to our lord ; with tridents start construction The tainted walls built with innocent blood, lies, deceit Four corner towers: Murder, Hate, Infidelity, and Lust One Demon looked up at me “Do YOU declare defeat?” Come Comrade join US --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 6:05:00 PM
You don't need a fly swatter but a devil one :) Stay still until they leak out of you pen and then...Got you!!! :) Sneaky little devils...All the best, iolanda (with wings)
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Date: 12/4/2010 12:51:00 PM
Those demons are sneaky, HG..they are forever pesky..invading lives. I must thank you for your kind wishes, HG! Thank you and God bless, always! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/4/2010 7:49:00 AM
Very frolicsome, witty and sarcastic write, HG
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