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why am I inside drawn like a moth to the flame sunshine beckons me yet here I sit, motionless obsessed with the screen ear buds block out the outdoors can't seem to break free take matters in my own hands show of force needed it is time to pull the plugs salvage what's left of daylight ————— The Choka form appears to be a string of 5-7-5-7-… with an extra 7 at the end? That’s the way I understood the description, but any opinions are welcomed!

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Date: 3/11/2022 1:04:00 AM
Hey Jeff…great poem know that feeling lack of motivation! Debx
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/11/2022 6:49:00 AM
it may be more that I'm getting sucked into the void! Thanks!
Date: 3/10/2022 4:28:00 PM
Well, A Rolling Stone gathers no moth. ~ Groan
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/11/2022 6:51:00 AM
And a rolling bear gathers no hair, except there, and there! moth break free, moth break free...