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Topsy Turvy Pudding

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written - 17th October 2024

I once made an upside down pudding But it slipped out whilst it was cooking It covered the oven base Was an absolute disgrace Yet the taste was second to nothing.

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 10/24/2024 9:43:00 AM

You've demonstrated once again that the proof is in the pudding! Quite clever, Robert

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/24/2024 1:05:00 PM

It certainly is. Thank you Robert… Beryl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/21/2024 11:34:00 AM

Long as it tastes good!! ;) clever one! I enjoyed reading. Thanks for your kind visit to me page.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Eileen. Keep writing, but above keep well and safe… Beryl

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/21/2024 10:21:00 AM

I can't agree more with Miss Pangie! You know how much I love your lims. Yummiest

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Anaya, yes I do love the Limerick form and so appreciate your kind words… Beryl

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/20/2024 12:37:00 AM

Fun write Beryl. It was obvious how much you enyoyed constructing this. Your use of the limerick form is supperb, Pangie xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Pangie, limericks are fun to write, even though they may be tripe…Beryl xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2024 1:50:00 AM

At least you could taste the topsy-turvy pudding. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:45:00 AM

Of course I had to have a taste, couldn’t let all the trouble to make the pudding go to waste. Thank you Victor, hugs sent back… Beryl

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2024 3:06:00 PM

sure made me smile and recall making pineapple upside down cake at school- thankfully it never got dropped lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:42:00 AM

I truly would not put a pudding to cook wrong way up, the Limerick was just for the fun of it. Thanks Jan… Beryl xx

John Read

Date: 10/18/2024 8:22:00 AM

Even though it was a mistake, nothing went to waste, it's no big deal you enjoyed your meal, I do admire your taste.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:40:00 AM

Thank you brother John, waste not want not is what folk say, food should never be thrown away… Sis Beryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2024 10:37:00 PM

haha, sounds like me if I drop something fantastic and pick it up and eat it anyway. Cute one!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2024 10:37:00 AM

And way not, it would be a waste to throw good food away, even though it was cooked the wrong way. Thank you Andrea… Beryl