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written - 17th October 2024

Topsy Turvy Pudding

I once made an upside down pudding But it slipped out whilst it was cooking It covered the oven base Was an absolute disgrace Yet the taste was second to nothing.
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Gorelick Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 9:43 AM
You've demonstrated once again that the proof is in the pudding! Quite clever, Robert
Edmonds  Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 1:05 PM
It certainly is. Thank you Robert… Beryl
Manassian Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Long as it tastes good!! ;) clever one! I enjoyed reading. Thanks for your kind visit to me page.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Eileen. Keep writing, but above keep well and safe… Beryl
Anaya Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:21 AM
I can't agree more with Miss Pangie! You know how much I love your lims. Yummiest
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Thank you so much Anaya, yes I do love the Limerick form and so appreciate your kind words… Beryl
Romios Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 12:37 AM
Fun write Beryl. It was obvious how much you enyoyed constructing this. Your use of the limerick form is supperb, Pangie xx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Pangie, limericks are fun to write, even though they may be tripe…Beryl xx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 1:50 AM
At least you could taste the topsy-turvy pudding. Hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Of course I had to have a taste, couldn’t let all the trouble to make the pudding go to waste. Thank you Victor, hugs sent back… Beryl
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 3:06 PM
sure made me smile and recall making pineapple upside down cake at school- thankfully it never got dropped lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:42 AM
I truly would not put a pudding to cook wrong way up, the Limerick was just for the fun of it. Thanks Jan… Beryl xx
Read Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Even though it was a mistake, nothing went to waste, it's no big deal you enjoyed your meal, I do admire your taste.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Thank you brother John, waste not want not is what folk say, food should never be thrown away… Sis Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 10:37 PM
haha, sounds like me if I drop something fantastic and pick it up and eat it anyway. Cute one!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:37 AM
And way not, it would be a waste to throw good food away, even though it was cooked the wrong way. Thank you Andrea… Beryl
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