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We were young and full of adventure Travelling in our kombi van Burning incense and listening To Cat Stevens and Bob Dylan We decided to climb a tourist peak Slowly making it to the top Going down was easier Though there was a lot of start and stop It was busy on the peak that day With tourists abound We had to keep standing aside On the narrow ground As we stood aside to let someone pass There was a buzzing in the air In a moment bees were upon me Down my top and in my long hair Without any thought or hesitation In a complete frenzied state of affairs Writhing and screaming I ripped off my top To tourist eyes aglare ……

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Date: 9/8/2022 11:44:00 AM
This was a fun read, at your expense sorry Deb, but this must have been the highlight of the tourists trip. so well penned, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/8/2022 5:42:00 AM
Good Morning Deb. Hi. Yes, you had us at the title (smile). You kept us with your words as you had the ability to place us all in the scene along with you. Yes, what a moment. Wonderful ending to this adventure (smile). Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always. Yes, beware of the bees. (smile)
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Date: 9/7/2022 6:28:00 PM
Lore of yore in someone's scrapbook a bit of top to exhibit in story time, I think so. I had a laugh off this glimpse.
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Date: 9/7/2022 5:06:00 PM
Ha! Ha! I thought this was about a mountain top.
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:50:00 PM
Hello Deb, those visitors got a surprise of their life. A visit they will never forget. Darlenexx
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Date: 9/7/2022 11:12:00 AM
Just think of all the people who knew their trip that day was worth their while! Enjoyed (as they did)! Aloha!
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Date: 9/7/2022 7:48:00 AM
lol that might have been funny now but then I'm sure you panicked lol, the things that once had us afraid today we laugh about, thank you for this lovely sharing, it put a smile on my face, love and light, Vie :)
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Date: 9/7/2022 2:42:00 AM
Wow, I can't imagine the looks lol. You had to do what you had to do Deb. Enjoyed reading...
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