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Top Of The World

From your perch, Daughter Cast your light upon the world Blinding your advance 11/14/11

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Date: 12/21/2011 7:27:00 PM
Your daughter seems to be the light in your world Jimbo, how lovely to share such a special relationship. Hope your Christmas is wonderful. LIzzie
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Date: 11/29/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this heart-felt write, Jimbo. I hope you and your daughter have a wonderful holiday season. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/23/2011 2:34:00 PM
What do you mean by "blinding your advance". Are you writing to your own daughter or to the woman of the world? Peace Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/18/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:43:00 AM
James, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:50:00 AM
It's wonderful that you see your daughter as a "light" that can brighten our world. Very good advice, Jimbo! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving with your family. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congrats Jimbo on an excellent win for these brilliant and impressive lines of Haiku luv..
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:46:00 AM
congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT
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Date: 11/15/2011 9:50:00 AM
Sons and daughters to caarry on the future; hope they have that light to cast upon the world. Lovely thought.
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Date: 11/14/2011 10:48:00 PM
Nice to do one for your daughter,James.
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:05:00 PM
EXCELLENT advice! Will share with my daughter, thanks JMG, Nancy
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