Top of the World

From your perch, Daughter Cast your light upon the world Blinding your advance 11/14/11

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/21/2011 7:27:00 PM

Your daughter seems to be the light in your world Jimbo, how lovely to share such a special relationship. Hope your Christmas is wonderful. LIzzie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/29/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your success with this heart-felt write, Jimbo. I hope you and your daughter have a wonderful holiday season. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Love, Carolyn

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/23/2011 2:34:00 PM

What do you mean by "blinding your advance". Are you writing to your own daughter or to the woman of the world? Peace Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:43:00 AM

James, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/17/2011 10:50:00 AM

It's wonderful that you see your daughter as a "light" that can brighten our world. Very good advice, Jimbo! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving with your family. Love, Carolyn