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Top of the World

wisps of clouds floating far below... an airhostess's call ================= Placement: 10th; (Nov.2011) Contest:Top of the World (Haiku) Sponsor:Irma Linda By:kashinath karmakar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:47:00 AM

Kash, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:42:00 AM

Congrats Kash on a spectacular win for these impressive lines of super Haiku vibrancy luv.. that last line is awesome ...

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:53:00 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/13/2011 8:07:00 AM

Hi Kash! Yes. That was an entry for PD's contest...picture someone standing on top of the world, i.e. Mt. Everest, and overcoming their greatest obstacle to get there. I was referring to my greatest fear, getting cancer, going thru chemotherapy, losing all my hair (bald), and soaring like an eagle to prevent my own extinction. Glad u enjoyed, Bengali brother. :) Off to church. Hope today is a great one. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/12/2011 2:39:00 PM

Hi Kash...you are at maximum altitude in this great haiku...Hope u are sitting in first class with a glass of chablis and some pretzels...ha ha. Still can't get the lil cricket off my mind..that was my most fav! :) Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:24:00 PM

Kash, about what you said somebody calling me the wrong name in the comments. I've been called worse! heehee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:23:00 PM

This is really good, in keeping with REAL haiku. I don't think mine is real haiku but hey, at least I used a line of my haiku as the title. hahaha. I sure hope this rates high,my friend!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/12/2011 3:53:00 AM

you can turn a moment inside airplane into poetic moment... Such a great talent :)

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/11/2011 4:58:00 PM

* “In My Minds Eye I Find This Beauty * My Dear Precious Kash * Amid The Face of Beautiful Heavenly Angels * Reaching With Tender Loving Arms * Their Eyes Are Sooo Soft & Beautiful * Floating Atop Silverish Clouds * Luv Always * Sarah.” *

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2011 3:55:00 PM

Interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2011 8:57:00 AM

nice shift, kashi buddy.. what a 'ku! ") huggs!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 11/11/2011 6:01:00 AM

unusual choice of closing line, think i'd have gone for something more natural, interesting, but not for me today.