Jan Allison Poet Senryu

Top Gun

first time with a gun
every shot is on target
concerned hubby hides!

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* On Monday we tried rifle shooting for the first time, seems like I have quite a flair for it!
9/12/18

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Mahtab Bangalee September 23, 2018 at 4:51 AM before bearing gun, learn to hide all fun.....

Dean Wood September 17, 2018 at 1:54 PM LOL! Does he have reason to hide? Enjoyed this!

Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2018 at 9:27 PM Great! Congratulations!

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 13, 2018 at 11:57 PM Congratulations, Jan on your win.

Line Gauthier September 13, 2018 at 3:53 PM Congrats on your win, Jan. Hubby needs to be concerned indeed.

Tom Cunningham September 13, 2018 at 3:35 PM You hit the bullseye here Jan, congrats. Tom

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2018 at 3:17 PM cute one, Jan. Big congrats.

Jack Horne September 13, 2018 at 10:48 AM good for you - hubby's very well behaved I presume??? LOL

Seren Roberts September 13, 2018 at 10:02 AM lol Jan hope you weren't aiming at the locals ...Seren

Charles Messina September 12, 2018 at 9:35 PM Okay, Calamity Jane. You have a hidden talent. Nice senryu Jan hugs // Charlie xx

Connie Marcum Wong September 12, 2018 at 7:05 PM I had to laugh at your last line in the humorous senryu Jan. Very clever! : )

John Lawless September 12, 2018 at 4:23 PM Andrea, don't tell me you're "a one shot wonder">.....

Gabrielle Jordan September 12, 2018 at 4:14 PM Adorable! My first laugh of the day! Thanks!

Ilene Bauer September 12, 2018 at 3:51 PM ha! i guess we never know what our untapped talents might be! i don't think your husband has to worry, though, jan...

Michelle Faulkner September 12, 2018 at 3:42 PM The 'surprise ending' gave me quite a chuckle!

Tim Smith September 12, 2018 at 3:25 PM Time to go hunting for sqweey rabbits

Winged Warrior September 12, 2018 at 2:33 PM Nice shot! Jan...just don't shoot any poets my friend lol...love & guns...^WW^