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first time with a gun
every shot is on target
concerned hubby hides!

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* On Monday we tried rifle shooting for the first time, seems like I have quite a flair for it!
9/12/18

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Mahtab Bangalee Date: 9/23/2018 4:51:00 AM before bearing gun, learn to hide all fun..... Login to Reply

Dean Wood Date: 9/17/2018 1:54:00 PM LOL! Does he have reason to hide? Enjoyed this! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/14/2018 9:27:00 PM Great! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/13/2018 11:57:00 PM Congratulations, Jan on your win. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/13/2018 3:53:00 PM Congrats on your win, Jan. Hubby needs to be concerned indeed. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/13/2018 3:35:00 PM You hit the bullseye here Jan, congrats. Tom Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2018 3:17:00 PM cute one, Jan. Big congrats. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/13/2018 10:48:00 AM good for you - hubby's very well behaved I presume??? LOL Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 9/13/2018 10:02:00 AM lol Jan hope you weren't aiming at the locals ...Seren Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 9/12/2018 9:35:00 PM Okay, Calamity Jane. You have a hidden talent. Nice senryu Jan hugs // Charlie xx Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/12/2018 7:05:00 PM I had to laugh at your last line in the humorous senryu Jan. Very clever! : ) Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 9/12/2018 4:23:00 PM Andrea, don't tell me you're "a one shot wonder">..... Login to Reply

Gabrielle Jordan Date: 9/12/2018 4:14:00 PM Adorable! My first laugh of the day! Thanks! Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 9/12/2018 3:51:00 PM ha! i guess we never know what our untapped talents might be! i don't think your husband has to worry, though, jan... Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 9/12/2018 3:42:00 PM The 'surprise ending' gave me quite a chuckle! Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 9/12/2018 3:25:00 PM Time to go hunting for sqweey rabbits Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 9/12/2018 2:33:00 PM Nice shot! Jan...just don't shoot any poets my friend lol...love & guns...^WW^ Login to Reply