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first time with a gun every shot is on target concerned hubby hides! Contest Sponsored by Branh Bailey * On Monday we tried rifle shooting for the first time, seems like I have quite a flair for it! 9/12/18

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Date: 9/23/2018 4:51:00 AM
before bearing gun, learn to hide all fun.....
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Date: 9/17/2018 1:54:00 PM
LOL! Does he have reason to hide? Enjoyed this!
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:27:00 PM
Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/13/2018 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan. Hubby needs to be concerned indeed.
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:35:00 PM
You hit the bullseye here Jan, congrats. Tom
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:17:00 PM
cute one, Jan. Big congrats.
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Date: 9/13/2018 10:48:00 AM
good for you - hubby's very well behaved I presume??? LOL
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Date: 9/13/2018 10:02:00 AM
lol Jan hope you weren't aiming at the locals ...Seren
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Date: 9/12/2018 9:35:00 PM
Okay, Calamity Jane. You have a hidden talent. Nice senryu Jan hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:05:00 PM
I had to laugh at your last line in the humorous senryu Jan. Very clever! : )
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:23:00 PM
Andrea, don't tell me you're "a one shot wonder">.....
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:14:00 PM
Adorable! My first laugh of the day! Thanks!
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:51:00 PM
ha! i guess we never know what our untapped talents might be! i don't think your husband has to worry, though, jan...
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:42:00 PM
The 'surprise ending' gave me quite a chuckle!
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:25:00 PM
Time to go hunting for sqweey rabbits
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Date: 9/12/2018 2:33:00 PM
Nice shot! Jan...just don't shoot any poets my friend lol...love & guns...^WW^
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