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Top-Heavy Trudy

When top-heavy Trudy went drinking

She noticed the men were all blinking

     Her low neckline falling

     Dear Lord, it’s appalling

That Trudy’s own “three eyes” were winking

  

*Written June 11, 2014

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Arlene Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 8:20:00 PM

Funny, Carolyn!! congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Fisher

Date: 7/8/2014 8:27:00 PM

This is a fun poem and great win, Carolyn. Sounds like I used to look for Trudys when I went out with bosom buddies.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/7/2014 10:15:00 AM

Oh funny girl, grats on your win ;)

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/7/2014 9:13:00 AM

Sounds like something out of Star Trek. Congrats on getting bawdy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2014 8:27:00 AM

you did GREAT with this one, CArolyn. BIG congrats for a well deserved win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/7/2014 6:30:00 AM

Oh Carolyn it's a great one ! Congrats on top place win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2014 5:53:00 AM

Nice image of the three eyes, Carolyn. congrats on the win

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2014 7:23:00 PM

Congratulations Carolyn..hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2014 5:55:00 PM

Ooops !!! Victoria needs to tell Trudy a secret!!! LOL !! Congrats Carolyn !!

Jadazzle United

Date: 7/6/2014 5:12:00 PM

dropping back with our congratulations. Jan & Darren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2014 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Carolyn. Hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/6/2014 3:45:00 PM

Good meter gal! Congrad's on your win.

John Lawless

Date: 7/6/2014 3:38:00 PM

Congrats, well deserved kudos (wink, wink)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/16/2014 4:59:00 PM

I needed a good laugh Carolyn and this fits the bill in spades excellent limerick hugs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/15/2014 7:33:00 PM

hahahaaaaaaaaaa great Carolyn, very witty about titties! LOL So glad you got mt play on words too! Light & Love

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/15/2014 1:04:00 PM

....the dairy-bar's melting! Very witty write Wonderful! Love always ~~Keith~~

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/15/2014 10:14:00 AM

Oooops......no peeking !!!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2014 7:44:00 AM

LOL, so glad this was a winner : )

Daver Austin

Date: 6/14/2014 10:23:00 AM

Oh how I love a person who can write a good limerick. This one is tops. Love, daver

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2014 4:03:00 AM

Nice one Carolyn...best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2014 9:15:00 AM

CArolyn. Your rhyme and your meter are SPOT ON. And also it's a very funny one. I think this is the best I've seen from you where limericks are concerned!

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/13/2014 1:02:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. You know the Soup's "Forms" section says nothing about meter. I never check meter when I have a contest. This is an international site and people have different ways of speaking. Remember the "surreal" debate? Dictionary says it's three syllables and that's how I pronounce it. A high school teacher made fun of a metered poem I wrote. She "sang" it and it was embarrassing.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2014 9:02:00 AM

Sort of like Michael Jackson's sister..She had a costurme failure..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/13/2014 1:08:00 PM

In college I used to make costumes for the theater department, but there was one occasion when I had to use a costume that someone else made. Then I went on stage and,raised my arms, the costume with Velcro seams broke apart. :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/12/2014 8:25:00 AM

Do you have any pictures??? Sorry couldn't resist, this was fun.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/12/2014 1:57:00 PM

Richard, when I was swimming in the community pool, I started a conversation with a fellow who seemed very nervous. It wasn't until he swam away that I realized I had a third eye winking. Won't be wearing that swimsuit again. It's just too big.

Jadazzle United

Date: 6/12/2014 7:45:00 AM

I love Trudy , Where does she live , lol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2014 1:39:00 AM

hahahahah Can't smile but had a roaring laughter, Carolyn