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Sharing hard candy with her best friend Shirley Impossible task if deciduous teeth are lost prematurely Although each child progresses in a different rate My predecessor took its time as I came in a little late I caused Chloé pain erupting—cutting through her gum An icepack so frigid was chilling, making me numb Chloés sneaky attempts to hide sweets in her room Have cost her front baby teeth to come out to soon Candy, I chomp up and bite down ‘til it’s in many pieces Crunchy and noisy, sugar and saliva all over me releases A child should brush us teeth, at least twice per day And avoid sugary foods that promote tooth decay A stubborn child who doesn’t listen to mom's wise advice Needs to be told over again, more than once more than twice A sweet tooth like me never gives in and so, I have a chip Off to the dentist we’ll go, for a temporary behind Chloé’s sore lip!

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Date: 8/31/2023 12:43:00 PM
Cute personification. Who knew teeth had a sense of humor? Hope your week is good
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/4/2023 6:42:00 AM
Best let all sleeping dogs lie!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/31/2023 3:03:00 PM
Goody!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/31/2023 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Doing better, now!
Date: 8/31/2023 12:29:00 AM
Good advice. Yes it is so important to look after your teeth from an early age. A good poem. Well done.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/31/2023 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Date: 8/31/2023 12:16:00 AM
Brrr you had me wincing and shuddering all through this! I hate dentists! An earthmoving mind bending poem dear Anaya !! I hated it, but I loved it dearly too. Pay heed all you Chloe's out there. This can really happen, listen to Anaya, she will tell you.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/31/2023 9:25:00 AM
"Listen to Anaya" my new advice column, ha ha. I shudder too, and I'm constantly thinking about my teeth, now. No sugar here, Splenda!
Date: 8/30/2023 7:32:00 PM
Great advice in this fun read Anaya. Thank you for posting...
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/30/2023 7:48:00 PM
Micheal, this was the first thing I thought teeth, they are actually always on my mind. The tikes need to be taught early, brusha brusha brusha! Great to see you, be well. xhugs
Date: 8/30/2023 5:00:00 PM
Aww…in the end so hard for Chloe!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/30/2023 5:14:00 PM
Stubborn girl, with a sweet tooth! ;)

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