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you ... are the paramour of right angles the square of a square - complete, quite aware how two must adore you for all it sees is itself, reflected an angular fist - quite the narcissist and the first number, sublime, that is NOT a prime you move with order ... perfection enclosed, at the helm of a harmonious realm antithesis of lucky clover, and balance of the cornered circuit you are numbered of the elements - the seasons cycle your breath and how would a deck of cards go out for a night on the town without your fancy suits to wear ... debonair? how lost the world would be without you to show us direction - to section the areas of space ... to sing to us in the voice of violins to carry us safely to our joys, spinning beneath our seats to give motion, food and escape to the creatures features of the gospels and horsemen, dark hark - even the chambers of the heart ... thrum for your sake and coordination you are safety and symmetry, precision and enclosure e'en the wind knows your order and actuality, factually, see ... is it any wonder, number ... that you are my favorite? (when with your little sister, of course). ~ 1st Place ~ in the "What's In A Number" Poetry Contest, Juliet Ligon, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/2/2020 3:18:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for this wonderful piece. God bless you.
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Date: 3/1/2020 1:33:00 PM
Delightful Greg. Congrats on the gold!
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Date: 3/1/2020 12:04:00 PM
Greg, there are so many wonderful touches to this poem. You've creatively weaved in so many themed associations with this number. I loved it - so clever!
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Date: 3/1/2020 7:35:00 AM
Congrats on your top poem! Well done!
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Date: 3/1/2020 3:04:00 AM
Your take on this number prompt is excellent, Greg. Apart from the content matter I also like the effective sprinkling of internal rhyme. ~ Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/1/2020 1:57:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your UNIQUE poem. Best Wishes.
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:18:00 PM
Yet another exceptional poem flows from your pen, many congrats Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:01:00 PM
haha, you came in first and I was bottom. but if i were to make the list at all, I expected that!! Remember I commented on this one just the other day and told you how outstanding it was compared to mine. Congratulations, I KNEW this had to win and I'm so pleased for you!!
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! Great personification, creatively bringing a sense of importance to the number.
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:38:00 PM
Gregory, hitting on all 4 cylinders! More brilliant poetry from your golden pen. So nicely capturing many aspects of "fourness". Love the deck of cards going out on the town in their fancy suits! Great title, and internal rhymes, too. Congrats on #1 ~ John
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:28:00 PM
Not a fave number of mine though. Is it truly your favorite? Maybe it's your numerology number!!
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:27:00 PM
oh my gosh this is the one I WANTED to write but I ended up instead with a LESSER version of this one (if you see mine, it's describing the number but not as clearly as you did it ) and then describing the things that come in 4's. Outstanding work, best one I have seen. A fave.
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Date: 2/28/2020 6:27:00 PM
Cute title! A fun write starting with the first two lines! Hope you read my new sonnet!
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