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Too Square For Two

you ... are the paramour of right angles
the square of a square - complete, quite aware
how two must adore you
for all it sees is itself, reflected
an angular fist - quite the narcissist
and the first number, sublime, that is NOT a prime
you move with order ... perfection
enclosed, at the helm of a harmonious realm
antithesis of lucky clover, and balance of the cornered circuit
you are numbered of the elements - the seasons cycle your breath
and how would a deck of cards go out for a night on the town
without your fancy suits to wear ... debonair?
how lost the world would be without you
to show us direction - to section the areas of space ...
to sing to us in the voice of violins
to carry us safely to our joys, spinning beneath our seats
to give motion, food and escape to the creatures
features of the gospels and horsemen, dark
hark - even the chambers of the heart ...
thrum for your sake and coordination
you are safety and symmetry, precision and enclosure
e'en the wind knows your order and actuality, factually, see ...
is it any wonder, number ... that you are my favorite?
(when with your little sister, of course).







~ 1st Place ~  in the "What's In A Number" Poetry Contest, Juliet Ligon, Judge & Sponsor.
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Agustin Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 3:18 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for this wonderful piece. God bless you.
Poteet Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Delightful Greg. Congrats on the gold!
Watson Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Greg, there are so many wonderful touches to this poem. You've creatively weaved in so many themed associations with this number. I loved it - so clever!
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Congrats on your top poem! Well done!
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 3:04 AM
Your take on this number prompt is excellent, Greg. Apart from the content matter I also like the effective sprinkling of internal rhyme. ~ Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
Dutta Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 1:57 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your UNIQUE poem. Best Wishes.
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:18 PM
Yet another exceptional poem flows from your pen, many congrats Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:01 PM
haha, you came in first and I was bottom. but if i were to make the list at all, I expected that!! Remember I commented on this one just the other day and told you how outstanding it was compared to mine. Congratulations, I KNEW this had to win and I'm so pleased for you!!
Ligon Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! Great personification, creatively bringing a sense of importance to the number.
Watt Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Gregory, hitting on all 4 cylinders! More brilliant poetry from your golden pen. So nicely capturing many aspects of "fourness". Love the deck of cards going out on the town in their fancy suits! Great title, and internal rhymes, too. Congrats on #1 ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:28 PM
Not a fave number of mine though. Is it truly your favorite? Maybe it's your numerology number!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:27 PM
oh my gosh this is the one I WANTED to write but I ended up instead with a LESSER version of this one (if you see mine, it's describing the number but not as clearly as you did it ) and then describing the things that come in 4's. Outstanding work, best one I have seen. A fave.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Cute title! A fun write starting with the first two lines! Hope you read my new sonnet!
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