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For contest sponsored by Joseph May

"The stars beckoned her song to reach the crescent moon" The song is sacred her heart broken black and doomed You see the sun set upon her head making mockery For her newborn was stillborn oh the hypocrisy Her song was supposed to reach God and bless hearts Instead it was one of agony and silver suffering sobs The light of the crescent moon came through the room As if death is beautiful weaving tears in a loon As if her baby is an angel too soon

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Date: 6/10/2025 4:51:00 PM
This is surreal yet made so real. A story made good for the reels. Congrats.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 5:42:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/8/2025 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet very sad "Too soon An Angel" write. I hope this is just a write and Not true. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/8/2025 1:48:00 PM
It wasn’t true but I imagined how I’d feel! Thanks Paula!
Date: 6/8/2025 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win Karen, Nicely penned
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/8/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 6/6/2025 2:35:00 PM
While certainly heart-rending, you somehow made this into an inspirational write, Karen. Magical on your part, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/6/2025 3:32:00 PM
Aw you are so kind Gershon! Thank you!
Date: 6/5/2025 9:22:00 PM
Hi Ms. Karen Jones, ure always online, its great! How old r u? I'm 46 just want to friends with u. Can we be friends?
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/5/2025 9:35:00 PM
lol I am here in spurts! Hello Jaqueline and sure we can be friends!

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry