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Too Much of a Good Thing

Two white rabbits arrived on Easter Sunday They sat in the basket, didn’t get away Until I woke and found them nestling there A wee young girl, I began stroking their hair As they grew older, there was a cage to clean The pellets they ate looked like awful cuisine Each day they went running through our enclosed yard Dad’s vegetable garden was ravaged hard Although Dad was dismayed, he never yelled out For he enjoyed watching them romping about I loved my bunnies, but boy did they grow fast They were bigger and bigger as each week passed By the end of summer as cooler winds blew I had 15 rabbits instead of just two Who would have guessed how quickly they procreate Leaps and bounds above normal human birth rate Finally came the day when Dad said, “Enough!” But giving them away proved terribly tough Our neighbors had seen what had happened to us Mom was in distress and put up quite a fuss Folks at the Humane Society just laughed To feed them, they would have needed a bank draft I placed them in a wagon, went door-to-door Found homes for thirteen, but still had two more Till the kindly old woman across the street Offered them a room in her “luxury” suite Suddenly one night the lady disappeared “Foreclosure,” some said, and that is what we feared By spring she had opened a "Bunny Resort" Visitors came, but she filed no earnings report The tax man came by and she vanished again Left on our doorstep, an empty rabbit pen A note was attached, explanation given She’d bestowed the rabbits on a magician So when I see rabbits pulled out of a hat I enjoy thinking we played a role in that
*Written February 24, 2012 for Carol's "Bunny Rabbits" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/31/2012 6:54:00 PM
On the right side of my screen are these ads for premium bunny houses and hutches...bet your neighbor across the street could have used a few of these....lol....
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Date: 3/31/2012 6:53:00 PM
You took a wonderful part of your childhood and turned it into a warm and entertaining rhyme!.....can u hear my printer?..........print.......print......gotta read this one to my girls on Easter.....
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:35:00 AM
Carolyn, congrats on your bunny win! Rhonda:)
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:01:00 AM
Carolyn, thanks for the ride, this poem is awesome. Congrats on winning Carol's contest.......................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations love this bunny tale xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:20:00 PM
Oh this was a number 1 for me ! Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:19:00 AM
congrats Carolyn on a fantastic win for this cleverly crafted write on bunnies for Carol's cool contest luv...
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Date: 2/29/2012 8:39:00 AM
Great poem and story. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/29/2012 8:33:00 AM
It seems part of this story comes from a real life situation....but I love the magical ending!! Congratulations, dear Carolyn!!
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:52:00 AM
A delightful gem Carolyn, enjoyed every line, wishing you all the best for Carol's contest :) love Wilma
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:08:00 AM
A treasure! Love animal stuff a LOT! Have been rehabilitating the house, so not writing much. I will try to keep up though with other's work. Love, daver
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:33:00 PM
ha! great story. Is this based on a true experience? so true how fast rabbits copulate! I love how you ended this - so fun - a creative idea :)
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:15:00 PM
So sweet! I loved it poem from start to finish and I enjoyed reading. Best wishes in the concert. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2012 12:36:00 PM
LOL, love this fun piece, my friend. Many congrats on your wins, of course : )
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Bunny Rabbit contest Carolyn. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:40:00 PM
well written poem! I enjoyed reading about the bunnies.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:21:00 PM
very nice rhyming. it had me believing all the time. and i did'nt get sleepy at the length. so you know it's good.
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Date: 2/24/2012 5:15:00 PM
loved reading this..so nice and easy-flowing, hope u r well, luv, jag
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:36:00 PM
Such a joy to be reading your work this early evening... I have missed your work and you too... hope your well and happy.. luv Michael
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