Too Much of a Good Thing

We yearned for rain, for spring had been so dry.
We got wet one day. Would things get better?
The sun blazed so intensely in the sky.
Only in the park’s pool could we get wetter.
Then came the time of our celebration.
We’d sweltered until Independence Day.
A pelting rain caused  no great elation,
for picnics and fireworks that rain did slay!
But rain it did, and it’s been surprising
for rarely has it stopped! Eight days have passed,
and everyone I know is now surmising
we’ll soon have flooding. How long will this last?
We’d prayed for rain to aid in the crops’ growing, 
yet the sound of pounding rain keeps going.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 2:40 PM
I guess when can't be choosy. Getting the rain is better than not having it. I guess...Thanks for posting Dear Andrea. xoxo
George Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:38 PM
When it rains, it rains cats and dogs ! Now we are having monsoon rains here. The sound of pounding rain falls in our ears continuously without stop. Well done Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
Roger  Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Life still goes on... I wish for rain so I can plant on the garden I bought... Water source is too far... Congratulations on this wonderful piece...
Rolland Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:09 AM
all is question of balance to survive here, sun and rain,etc...enjoyed ths message and the elegant penning
Ricci Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:17 AM
Hello Andrea. Good Morning. Yes, too much of a good thing exactly be it the sun or the rain. Your words flowed and your rhyming read with ease and was never forced. If this is true for where you sit, may the sun show itself. Have a wonderful morning. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Blessings (smile)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:47 PM
You expressed , "Too much of a good thing" very nicely. We got flooded couple of months ago, so relate . Needed 19 sand bags. Congrats, well done.
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Well done--skillfully written and vividly descriptive, Andrea. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Bueckert Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:10 PM
So true but we'll take some of that rain up here! Nicely written and congrats :)
Hawley Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:33 PM
Its raining right now and yes, its been rather dry. We need the rain but I'd prefer not to have too much of a good thing, because floods are a bad thing, and perhaps they stink more than a crazy dry spell. Congrats!
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Andrea, your exquisite poem boasts superb imagery and masterful rhyming. Well done!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:43 AM
A captivating poem, Andrea. Thank God in Malta we do get so much rain. On the contrary in churches, we often pray for rain. My fear is that we will have a terrible summer. Temperatures are already soaring.
Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 1:55 AM
I chose the same line, Andrea, yours is a well-done sonnet:) it's terrible when it rains non-stop...
Maverick Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:41 PM
I shall have to stop late soupmailing i spelt Echidna with an A..after starting right First time, and the De-sotos..I did find Out 4 years ago they were actually American, and had forgotton.' This is No doubt age related Andrea, added Is the fact we had loads of them all Right hand drive, so they are part of my Early memories in 1978 old cars were being Sold for $25 as stock cars so i and another Man wrecked a perfectly good hardtop For something tp do with a j c b machine What a waste.'
Peranteau Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 9:21 PM
Inclement weather haz always resulted in some uv my favorite writes dear poet ;) i pray for your pleasant weather soon Andrea...much love, james
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Sometimes, too much of a good thing can certainly become not too good!
Maverick Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:00 PM
To good indeed, as Nancy below puts thats The human creed.' Always missing whats Imagined..The betters held from us in fetters.' Though invisible they're harder to break, We feel for them frantic, as though our souls Are at stake.'
Kaufman Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Hi Andrea, Isn't it the nature of man to always want the opposite of what they are given? Good luck in your contest. Enjoyed.
Tor Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Love your theme Andrea clever as always...
Bell Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:34 AM
We pray for the sun, then it's too hot. We pray for the rain, then we can't cope. We're just not a happy lot. Pray my team wins tonight.
Bauer Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Nicely done, Andrea! I love your rhyming!
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