Too Many People

People, people everywhere, oh my
       Can't get out of their way, won't even try.
Everywhere you go it's the same old story.
       And won't know why until we get to Glory!
 
While shopping at the mall today, I spied,
       People, people everywhere, oh my.
I drove around and finally found,
       A spot, with no one else around.
 
I pulled into the space and parked.
       Looked around to see and mentally marked,
People, people everywhere, oh my.
       It just makes you really want to cry.
 
Went into the store and shopped.
       Didn't stay too long because it was flocked.
On every isle roaming by, why?
       People, people everywhere, oh my,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Marty, this fun poem reminded me of lions and tigers and bears oh my from the Wizard of Oz. I'm sure you were thinking of that when you wrote it! My hubbie HATES crowds, so I can rarely get him to go to crowded places with me. Well, it's over until next Xmas. Luv, Andrea ps thanks for your comment today.
Dufresne Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 8:11 PM
Great poem Marty. Nice rhyme. Bkuild the stores ..and they will come! Thanks for sharing.
Fraser Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 2:05 PM
And the more crowded it will get, kool piece >> James
Malebranche Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 3:07 AM
Reminds me of my time living in New York. So crowded, it was crazy.You couldnt take a step without bumping into someone.
Hilliker Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 11:30 AM
You said it! There's an overpopulation, yet everyone feels alone (from one of my poems). I totally agree with your experiences.
Espinoza Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 3:59 AM
...i love it....i feel the same way...thanks for commenting...hope to one day be as good as you....
Thomas Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 4:55 AM
I get overwhelmed by large crowds, so I can definitely relate to this poem! Good one! ~Juliane
Bono Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 9:26 AM
I don't like alot of people around.This is perfect.Hope you have a good day and holidays.
Chircop Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Marty,I love doing christmas shopping,yet you can imagine how crowded my little island can be in days like these, Now you bet why i love the Lakes,Rivers and Mountains ,they are a great escape..:)Lovely poem,,indeed i can relate--Charma:)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Nice poem, Marty. Wouldn't it be great if people were that busy spreading God's word!!! Love to you. Dane Ann
Robinson Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 9:08 PM
BLACK FRIDAY and Christmas. Haha it really does get hecktic!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 3:34 PM
The Christmas rush. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
Townsend Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 10:36 AM
I don't do crowds so I can relate. I also don't like the fact that everywhere I go there is always someone I know and they seem to keep me in that crowd longer so we can chat. I'm thinking...telephone... please! LOL Very well written. Smiles from Lolita
Haick Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 9:22 PM
I know what you mean! I don't like over crowded places either! Great write, Marty! Peace and love, Audrey
Lopez Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 7:10 PM
This describes shopping this time of year perfectly. I feel your frustations. and yet we still make the journey .......lol nice write!
Arteaga Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 11:24 PM
too many people in the malls, cities, towns...maybe just too many people everywhere...good poem.
Gorelick Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 10:33 PM
Oh my, do I get this one. I just cant stand the crowds. I enjoyed this true life poem. BG
Gorelick Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 10:33 PM
Oh my, do I get this one. I just cant stand the crowds. I enjoyed this true life poem. BG
Sheart Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 10:11 PM
Hi Marty, I know what you mean. When I travel and get back home I always breathe a sigh of relief. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
Devonshire Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 10:11 PM
Methinks you share my distaste for crowded malls, Marty. There are probably many readers who can share the angst you express so well here. And then, after finally finding your parking space, the crowds drive you to leave before you finish your shopping. The holiday season is getting to us, isn't it? This is a fun read, Marty, and filled with a lot of truth. Love, Carolyn
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