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Too Many Birds

Redbird sitting on a log, next to him was a funny looking frog. Blackbird calling out to me, so pretty is he. Sparrow making a nest, such pretty markings on his chest. Robin pecking for a worm to eat, which is quiet a feat. I know one thing, on this hot day, there is too many birds in my way. wrote 8-4-08

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Date: 8/5/2008 6:28:00 PM
(*)> Hey James! <(*)...they heard you say there were too many.:) I'm not sure if there were too many, or you were just too absorbed by their beauty and goings on. I love nature, and the birds sometimes seem to catch the eye, as well as enchant the ear. Nicely done..you've again created quite a scenario. God bless you and yours..Mikki
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Date: 8/4/2008 12:34:00 PM
And then you look here and what do you have - an Ol jail-bird - Just can't get away from all the birds can you - God Bless
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