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Too Late For the Education

“G’day mate, how’s it goin’?” Spoke out a soft and even drawl. I walked ‘cross the road toward the ute answering Jack’s friendly call. Pointing his thumb toward the back, “Do yer recognize that multi-breed?” Whose tail wagged; tongue’s hangin’ out, and needing a good feed. I scruffed the ‘fella’ on the head then looked him up and down. “Yeah!” I said “I’ve met him twice, when I was campin’ near a town. His owners out here wantin’ work; a raw green city bloke, who’d keep us all in ‘stitches’ with the way he’d tell a joke.” “Have yer seen him lately?” - I rubbed me chin realizing ‘No!’ “His dog’s been wanderin’ ‘round the place for near a week or so. Normally I would’a shot him but his whimpers at the door, set my mind to thinkin’ there may be something wrong for sure.” “You said his mate’s a city bloke who ain’t been out here long? Chuck yer swag up in the back; we'll find out what’s gone wrong.” We drove ‘round and ‘round the dusty roads until it was nearly dark. Finally near a line of red gums, the dog began to bark. “What’s up with him?” I’m asking Jack who replied “Let’s take a ‘peek.’ The only thing that’s down there is a bloody old dry creek.” From the bank we searched the course. Pools of water worried Jack. “We've had no rain for weeks here.” Then cursed, as he turned his back. “Come on!” Jack ran - “Jump in the ute. We’ll drive along and search the flanks. Release the dog and let him run to search between the banks.” A fence line stretched across the creek; we got out and followed that. ‘Mongst barbed wire snagged sticks and wood there’s a swag and one old hat. “Strike me pink!” Jack scratched his head. “Do you know what he’s done? I s’pose no one ever told him ‘bout the danger where there’s none. It ain’t rained here but further up they had three inches in a burst. He’d set up camp here in the creek!” - His best mate found him first.

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Date: 9/4/2020 6:10:00 AM
Great poetry l
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/8/2020 8:24:00 PM
Hello Paghunda ... I most certainly appreciate you reading and writing a comment - thanks Paghunda - Lindsay
Date: 8/30/2020 3:11:00 PM
What a smart dog but sounds like too late for his smarts!! WEll spun tale, Lindsay. Keep 'em coming.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/31/2020 6:22:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... dogs become very loyal and won't let their partner down in adversity. Thank you once again Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 8/28/2020 11:37:00 AM
A great read Lindsay but sad - No doubt to camp in a dry creek bed is dangerous - shame - no-one expected that amount of water that burst and came down - poor dog! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/31/2020 6:18:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... cloud bursts can occur miles away up on a hill and the result is water rushing along dry creek beds devastating anything in it's path - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 8/24/2020 12:25:00 PM
WoW! Some tale. Hope he kept the dog. He turned out to be a good one leading them back to his master. Poor dog, As always a fine story my friend. God Bless, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/25/2020 6:31:00 PM
Hello Judy ... thankfully this doesn't happen, or rarely does now. Campers are more educated that a dry creek bed can be a tragic hazard indeed. The dog would possibly be kept as a station dog - thank you Judy - Lindsay
Date: 8/24/2020 7:16:00 AM
Those flash floods are dangerous, great tale, great poetry...
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/25/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hello Harry ... when you witness the aftermath in a creek bed that is almost dry again, thoughts of a mini tsunami comes to mind, so of course anybody caught in it have virtually no hope of survival - thanks again Harry - Lindsay
Date: 8/20/2020 11:51:00 AM
Sonoran Desert washes have their own cemetery! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/25/2020 6:22:00 PM
Hello Rico ... I dare say that all around the world, nature can offer tragic surprises to the unwary - catch you soon Rico - Lindsay
Date: 8/20/2020 2:20:00 AM
Yikes, not a happy ending
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/25/2020 6:20:00 PM
Hello Tom ... not happy, but very surprising. A cloud burst miles away can end tragic if the knowledge is not there of these events - thank you Tom - Lindsay
Date: 8/20/2020 1:04:00 AM
Thank you for your flair, little injection of humour. I had forgotten "Strike me pink!"! Finesse in your adorable bush stories, Lindsay.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/25/2020 6:16:00 PM
Hello Sigrid ... I was warned a few times when camping in the outback to not camp in dry creek beds and this tale was told to me on one station. Yes, a lot of our own language is going out of fashion now - thank you Sigrid - Lindsay

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