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Too Late For Regrets..

Time stopped, just for a moment lovers crossed the inevitable line of ecstasy indulging in ones fantasies giving into the yearning desire,that burned so deep basking in each others flowing rivers, turning the fresh lit spark into an never ending blaze no thoughts, no fears, no worries suddenly, lightning strikes, the earth moved and Time resumes A cold front swept across the room bringing forth an unwanted chill not a word is spoken, their eyes never meet for feeling of guilt and regret will be forever painted on their faces when the door opens, all innocence leaves as the heart of the seed left behind bleeds and a conscience returns holding one bound in solitude wishing that time could rewind......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2009 3:53:00 AM
this is a really good write.. Thank you for sending me comments, and reading my poetry.. Thanks again, Beautiful write. Elizabeth
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Date: 2/13/2009 3:37:00 PM
Nice work Tyesha and thanks for your supporing comments...Raul
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Date: 2/6/2009 5:57:00 AM
Tyesha - First let me congratulate your brother - The first step is always the hardest - May God walk with him through his struggles - Excellent expression in this poem - I absolutely loved the ending of this poem the word choice was excellent - The title says it all - Sorry I haven't stopped by for awhile my life is rather hectic these days - God Bless you and those who share your heart, MJ
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Date: 1/29/2009 11:49:00 AM
Going through a scenario such as the one described here myself, I am really touched that someone else has perhaps gone through such a time or at least knows how to put it into words. Thank you for commenting on my "Last Poem" and encouraging me that there's still hope. In a world that's constantly spinning, the only thing you should give up on is regretting what you can't change, even if it is painful losing your innocence.
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Date: 1/29/2009 10:35:00 AM
It is sad that it can be that way after the fact. It takes something from the beauty of the experience and turns it to pain making us want to change what cannot be changed. This write so clearly reflects those feelings. Well said, Tyesha! Love, Robn
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