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Written in a time of stress and depression.

Too Hard to Write I cannot write. Not too few thoughts, But too many, Whirling, twisting In my mind – Too many fears, Too many doubts! The channels of My mind are choked, Like leaf-clogged gutters, With formless words That pour over and Are wasted on the Barren ground beneath. Fears fly around My head and knit My words into knots That ravel into strings Of nothingness. When will this nightmare Cease, the fears subside? Where can I hide? I feel the worst is yet to come, And yet I need to fight This feeling of despair! And so I try to tell myself That time will pass - That this brief moment in Eternity will someday Be only a memory. But will I ever truly Be at peace? I cannot tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/24/2021 5:42:00 PM
Much power; rich imagery...purposeful write, Barbara. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, as I am sure many others will.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/24/2021 6:04:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks again. It was a moment i n a long life. Things constantly change.
Date: 8/24/2021 3:59:00 PM
a memory. of brief moment
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/24/2021 6:04:00 PM
Fortunately, times do change. It was a difficult time, but things did improve!
Date: 8/24/2021 11:50:00 AM
Historically, men are always too hard to write! During wars, the letters wives write far outweigh those written by their husbands. . . .
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/24/2021 12:50:00 PM
I never thought of it that way. Mine was more that I wanted to pour everything out in writing but couldn't seem to do it. The poem turned out to be sort of just what I needed to write then.
Date: 8/24/2021 9:41:00 AM
but somehow you did write and we are all the better for it...
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for your fine comment. I agree. I think everyone goes through this sort of feeling at some point in life.
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:50:00 AM
Very powerful poem--and relatable.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/24/2021 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment. I think we all go through something like this at one time or another.

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