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Too Early

Leaves kissed by morning First light dances through branches Awakens fowl choir

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/2/2017 8:57:00 AM
Great write Joseph. A wonderful descriptive haiku, a hard form to master.
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Date: 4/25/2017 3:14:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words folks.... very much appreciated. love the haiku/senyru form, trying to put a great deal of detail into so few words... Thanks again
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Date: 4/24/2017 9:33:00 AM
This was a beaut. I love the line about the fowl choir and boy do they sing in my neighborhood. Great entry poem and welcome to poetrysoup!
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Joseph Soper
Date: 4/25/2017 3:14:00 AM
many thanks....
Date: 4/24/2017 3:24:00 AM
a joy to read Jospeh! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph Soper
Date: 4/25/2017 3:16:00 AM
thank-you much
Date: 4/24/2017 3:22:00 AM
Oh that fowl choir is always too early! Great write Joseph.
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Joseph Soper
Date: 4/25/2017 3:16:00 AM
was a fun litte way to describe the morning i thought/hoped