Too Distant Woods

My soul started yearning
And my feet grew all restless
To see the old hometown
And the place I was born.

Out back of my old house   
Sweet nature was waiting,
The woods of my youth
Were calling me home.

I drove all that night
And half the next morning
I pulled up to our place
Where strangers now lived.

Things looked pretty good
Till I checked out the backyard
And rows of new houses
Where the woods used to live.

I asked an old neighbor
Now gray and decrepit,
Where is the oak forest
Where we all used to play?

He said it's all gone now
Except for the memories,
A big old bulldozer
Has scraped them away.

They put up these houses
On top of each other
And squeezed the old woods
For each nickel and dime.

The trees are all gone now
Except for the memories,
A big old bulldozer
Has scraped them away.

I got back in my car
And headed for Bristol,
Didn't stop driving
For a night and a day.

I gazed at the trees
That stood on my woodlot
And swore no damn dozer
Would scrape them away.
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Rigoler Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 7:50 PM
I feel the same way, J. Some years ago I revisited my grandparents farm only to find it was gone, and the woods behind it were now duplexes, and the gravel road that led me into deeper woods and streams where as a boy I fished for rainbow trout – all gone as well. It's the price we pay for "progress", I suppose. / Maurice
Summers Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 9:16 PM
Thanks for reading. Progress is important…that’s why we have memories. John
Spilchuk Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. Nicely done.
Summers Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Thanks so much Dennis, nice of you to stop by. John
James Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Every where seems to be losing the green spaces and woods, it is also happening here. The people that make these decisions do not seem to build on their own door step. Pure greed every time. Save the trees and green spaces. Emilia : )
Summers Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Hi Emilia, thanks for reading. No, those calling the shots don’t build on their own door steps. Well, I have my memories. John
Hargreaves Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this. I remember the green space where I live. Twas grazing sheep and much woodland and supposed to be protected land. But somehow the rules were bent to build luxury homes. The woods have gone. The lambs have gone. The wildlife was simply booted out. The name of the game here is profit and greed.
Summers Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting. Thank goodness for memories. John
Volumes Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Beautiful poem John. We lived in a rural part of the country and the day they knocked the last tree down behind our house, I cried, nearly blinded by the light streaming in from where those tall shade giving trees used to be. A wonderful poem John. I adore your style of handling words. Thank you so very much, I loved this poem.
Summers Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:34 PM
It was a great part of my childhood until it became a 100 home subdivision. Well, people need to live somewhere. Thanks for stopping by. John
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Beautiful poetry my friend. Made me think of the destruction that came to the woods at my childhood home. Sad but tis reality. We lose the things we love in this world. That is a sad part of life. Your poem gave us reality in a very fine poetic creation. God bless.
Summers Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 10:58 AM
It was a great woods for playing. We climbed, made forts and even had a junked car or two to play in. Thanks for reading. John
M  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 3:57 PM
A lovely trip down memory lane J….shame the outcome was disappointing for you ….progress eh! At least you have your own woodlot to enjoy! Great poem….Debx
Summers Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Deb for stopping in to read. At my age the birds and squirrels enjoy the trees more than I. John
Deats Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 7:36 AM
I appreciate the content and the quality of your poetry. Enjoyable reading. Thank you for supporting my efforts.
Summers Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Thanks for reading. John
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 5:28 AM
you've expressed this so well - very moving
Summers Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Hello Jack, thanks for stopping by. Old trees, gone but not forgotten. John
Chuuk Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:07 PM
It is sad that so many fields are barren now. What used to be lushes with greeneries now standing wide open space. Great write, J
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:40 AM
So true Fin. Thanks for reading. John
Bell Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Progress, never quite got it myself. Nature is dying on its feet.
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting. I don't quite get it myself. John
Volumes Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 6:45 PM
I remember when they felled all the mighty gum trees in the bush behind our house. I stood and watched until I could watch no more, as each one fell to the ground. When they were done, the glare hurt our eyes until we became used to the shade not being there. Soon hundreds of houses appeared all we could do was despair. Your poem is wonderful.
Summers Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Thanks so much Wendy for reading and for the comments. Lots of good memories from those woods. John
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:44 PM
A hefty price 'for progress' we pay -- esp. when it tinkers with magical memories... Perhaps that's just another reason why they say, 'You can't go back...' Poignantly penned, John. Thanks, Gershon
Summers Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Thanks for reading Gershon and for the comments. Yeah, going back can be problematic but there are still some bright spots left. John
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