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Too Close to the Edge of the Precipice

"I'm going down to the river gonna take me my rocking chair
Going down to the river gonna take me my rocking chair
And if those blues don't leave me
Gonna rock on away from here" by George Harrison...My father-in-law used to say this a lot but it was from an old Blues song probably more of a folk kind.

Too close to the edge of fate we stand, On the mountain's peak, a risky land. At the precipice of life and death, Each step we take with anxious breath. Too young to bid this world goodbye, Too well to let our spirit fly. Yet fear grips us, a paralyzing chill, As we teeter on the edge, so still. Injury and danger lurking drear, Reminding us that death is near. But in this moment, we find strength, To step back from the edge at length. So let us live with courage bold, Embracing life, breaking the mold. For though we're scared of what may be, We choose to live, wild and free.
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Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 9:23 PM
Never realized what a daredevil you are, Sara! Powerful penning, my friend. ~ Timid Tom the Tulip
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Thank you, Gershon. TTTT good nickname. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 11:28 AM
We are always on the brink of death, but suicide is never the answer. Loved your poem.
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Yes, Victor, we never know when our time will come. I agree suicide is not the answer in any situation and the person that depressed really needs professional help. Thanks for the visit and the kind review of my work. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:12 AM
better step back, sometimes, this is beautifully written, wish you the best Sara
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, Yann. We never know what we might be waiting ahead that could help another suffering soul. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 10:00 AM
A wonderful write with a great ending. I would love a rocking chair by the water. Have A Fun Day In A Rocking Chair.........
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Yes, a rocking chair would be nice and a note pad and ink pen. Thanks for the visit, Paula. Your visits are delightful. Sara K
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