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Tone Down the Intensity

Tone down the intensity Is like telling the sun Not to reach its zenith Of blazing, scorching heat Or telling the waterfall Just as it is ready to gush Down in a tumult of Freshness to hold back At the edge Or telling the volcano Seconds away from erupting Hot molten lava To reingest the heat And lie dormant Or telling the tsunami That is rushing headlong To the shoreline To recede back into Nothingness and let go Of its momentum of power Or the shooting star To not leave a sparkling trail As the friction with air Causes it to burn in brilliance But to remain motionless A pale light On a dotted black sky Tone down the intensity For a person who embodies it Is like telling nature to stand still With bated breath When all it wants to do Is burst into a song of celebration. Tone down the intensity? Not a chance… Tone UP the capacity To live life! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2014 6:45:00 AM
I love your intensity, and your descriptions are awesome ;)
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:02:00 AM
Awesome Eileen! Loved the descriptions and the images of nature really got your point across. Why should anyone be anything but who they are? I appreciate you being yourself :) Also I'm not back quite yet (10 days until I'm in the states again)... but I had a little free time and thought I'd check up on the Soup!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/10/2013 1:20:00 PM
Yea....thanks, Timothy....not everybody likes...Intense people! It sort of freaks them out...laid back and easy. That's seems to be popular....Oh well...it takes all kinds, doesn't it? Thanks for the post!
Date: 4/9/2013 10:03:00 AM
Intense...in every way. I don't have to worry about turning down the intensity...I'm too laid back...GREAT poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/10/2013 1:21:00 PM
Be happy, Caleb...people like laid back! :) It sure has its perks! Hugs, and thanks!
Date: 4/9/2013 8:40:00 AM
WOW! Adding this to my faves, Eileen! Your descriptions are perfect, and the message is so full of truth.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/10/2013 1:19:00 PM
Heather...what a wonderful thing to say! Thank you! :) I'm honored.
Date: 4/9/2013 7:48:00 AM
This is a good one Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2013 7:50:00 AM
Why thank you, Richard. I'm glad you like it!

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