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as summer befalls a moonless night if only to the depths of my heart i hold my breath and draw you near you are as silent as the sky is still why must i read between the lines and sleep not be my guest tonight again and again the tide to and fro does my heart beat in vain for a tomorrow that may never come AP: Honorable Mention 2024 Posted on July 19, 2023

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/25/2023 6:45:00 AM

Dear Line, So sad to hear of your loss Dear Poetess. Even in the depths of mourning your poetry continues to be so inspiring: succinct with such well chosen words, imagery and open hearted.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/3/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Nancy ~most appreciated

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 3:49:00 PM

A very moving poem, Line. Peace be with you as you process your loss. My thoughts and prayer are with you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/22/2023 2:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Bill. All the best to you ~

Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 5:09:00 PM

Hey this is quite touching. I like it. "If tomorrow never comes..."

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/6/2023 4:24:00 PM

Thank, Tom. Much appreciated ~

Sand Blown

Date: 8/19/2023 11:31:00 PM

....buddhas....in the sand......nice....stan

Tom Woody
Date: 8/22/2023 5:08:00 PM

Huh?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/19/2023 11:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, Stan ~ have a lovely day

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2023 12:06:00 AM

Such a moving melancholy piece Line. Hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2023 6:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan. Much appreciated ~

John Read

Date: 8/6/2023 9:58:00 AM

Lovely heartfelt poem Line, I know the feeling only to well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2023 2:52:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated comment, John ~

Jean Murray

Date: 7/30/2023 1:09:00 AM

Line, deepest sympathy on your recent bereavement. I truly believe the veil is thin and took great comfort from the book Signs by Laura Lynne Jackson.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2023 5:29:00 AM

Thanks for your lovley message, Jean ~

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/25/2023 8:55:00 PM

Oh, the melancholy captured at its very best! I love this. A fave!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2023 12:08:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely compliment, JCB ~

John Read

Date: 7/24/2023 9:35:00 AM

A very moving poem Line.xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/24/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, John.