Tomorrow's Future

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My body may not be here, but I am with you, and you will be with me.

Yes, it is true... Today is the first day of the rest of my life And all of my today's will be the same Tomorrow will come for sure Will I be in it? Will you be in it? Will everyone be in it? Tomorrow seems so far away But yes... I will be there tomorrow You will be there tomorrow Everyone will be there tomorrow ~ Even if we are six feet under ~ Our spirits float in the whispering winds For today For tomorrow Tomorrow Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 11/12/2018

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/1/2018 11:35:00 AM

i really like this! it's succinct and mystical and quite lovely :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/1/2018 11:22:00 AM

Visceral, thought-provoking write, Charles!:-) Congratulations on placing in my contest!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/21/2018 6:46:00 PM

Profound, yet optimistic and light as air in the same breath. Eloquent expression! Best wishes, Gershon

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/13/2018 4:32:00 PM

Love the positivity of this wonderful poetry..

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 11/13/2018 3:53:00 AM

A very engaging philosophical piece, very nicely written.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2018 1:20:00 AM

- "Today is the first day of the rest of my life" .... I like this line ... because that's so true, Charlie - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)