Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Tomorrow You Can Fly -

The one who doubts his own doubts
is like counting snowflakes in a snowstorm
Remember to thank for health and luck,
see everything in a slightly larger perspective
And speak the language of poetry fluently
We are all the same seed of life
Reason and dreams of lily of the valley


On a meadow ... a secret of unseen little surprise
... the sweetest mouse on earth
When the evening comes and everyone goes to rest
sleep well in your fluffy bed
Don't fear the wind
it will be as smooth as your breath
Under a sky full of stars
Tomorrow you can fly ... you're free







29.05.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Poem of the Day: 30/05/2019

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John Castellenas September 9, 2020 at 10:21 AM So beautiful. The photo was amazing and I liked the positive energy of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2020 at 10:26 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Knowlton June 23, 2019 at 9:20 AM Beautiful poem and pic Sunshine. Congrats on having one of the best of the best. Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2019 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2019 at 5:59 PM Hello Sunshine Smile The tomorrows always have secrets.I pray for health and luck. Have a nice evening my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:55 PM - Many thanks Darlene for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael June 4, 2019 at 8:55 AM Congratulations Anne-Lise...It's an unchained write...with good vibes too...All the best Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:54 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf June 3, 2019 at 4:34 PM I enjoyed this one so much, especially the whimsical, carefree nature of the second stanza,...and now I see that it's a POTD winner. Beautifully done! :) gw Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:53 PM - Many thanks for lovely comment, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands June 3, 2019 at 8:59 AM This is great. Congratulations! A favorite for me :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 2:52 PM - Thanks for visiting, a fave and congratulations Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One June 2, 2019 at 7:40 AM Yes, always keep the hope... congrats on potd.. Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:17 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley June 1, 2019 at 9:12 PM Oh, your poem is such a shining gem of beauty and inspiration, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your well-deserved and wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:17 PM - Many thanks Susan for visiting ... your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden June 1, 2019 at 8:58 PM This is beautiful, Anne-Lise, and I thank you so much for sharing with us ... this truly cheered me up, and put things back in perspective - the simple joys! Blessings and congrats on POTD, my friend! :-) <3 Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:16 PM - Many thanks for visiting, Gregory ... your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2019 at 6:13 AM Ahh...like a breath of fresh air! Congratulations, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:15 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios June 1, 2019 at 4:49 AM Beautiful Poem with a message, Thank you ~ Panagiota~ Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:15 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 31, 2019 at 6:26 PM This is so adorable Anne-Lise. Big Congratulations on your POTD honors! xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:14 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman May 31, 2019 at 2:34 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on POTD!! This is a beautifully-done free verse poem in every respect, and an instant FAVE in my book!! I've been away from the Soup since the beginning of this year as I'm presently finalizing the manuscript of my second book of poetry (approx. 500-pages) for publication and release later this year by my publisher. I shall be in touch with you and Liam later too via e-mail. Keep up all the great writing you are doing!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:13 PM - A pleasant and surprising visit ... so nice to see you Gary :) - I know you have a lot to do ... say hello to Ingrid from me - Many thanks for your valuable fave and friendly congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley May 31, 2019 at 7:56 AM My friend , congratulations on your fine poem being chosen to be POTD. *As a beauty it shines its glowing light. *Illuminating the safest path at night. *A lit lantern, magnificent to read. *Inspiring to those without guile or greed. Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:09 PM - Many thanks for visiting ... your comment and congratulations, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose May 31, 2019 at 5:27 AM Honest to God you come up with the cutest poems and photo. Sweet as ever, and very clever S.S. Thank you . Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:08 PM - Pixie, many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser May 30, 2019 at 4:11 PM I love it, so true and that is one precious picture, as well. Had to "fav". Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:08 PM - Many M.L., thanks for the lovely comment and your valuable fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos May 30, 2019 at 3:07 PM Tomorrow you can fly - you're free - what a wonderful heartfelt write - it made my day that you got POTD - congratulations dear soul sister - you deserve this honor bestowed on you. Hugs Sunshine Smile, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:06 PM - Sister Jenny, many thanks for visiting, your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner May 30, 2019 at 2:01 PM Congratulations Anne Lise on POTD honors. Such an uplifting message:) Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:06 PM - Many thanks for visiting, your comment and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole May 30, 2019 at 1:57 PM "Tomorrow you can fly ... you're free" Exactly. A positive thought travels along the wind, creating more uplifting thoughts. Only if you truly believe. :) This is so beautiful Anne-Lise. Your words take my heart to the sky. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:05 PM - Many thanks Brandy, for visiting, your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll May 30, 2019 at 12:37 PM So beautiful and desrving of the POTD honors, Anne-Lise. "We are all the same seed of life Reason and dreams of lily of the valley" My favorite lines and also one of my favorite flowers, Sending many big hugs your way~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:04 PM - Warren, many thanks for visiting, your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf May 30, 2019 at 10:36 AM Such a beautiful, uplifting poem, Anne-Lise, congrats on POTD. John Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:04 PM - Many thanks for visiting, your comment and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter May 30, 2019 at 10:09 AM So beautiful - like a lovely violin playing. Congratulations. Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:03 PM - Sunlite, many thanks for visiting, your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper May 30, 2019 at 8:29 AM Great pen, Sunshine, congratulations in POTD.. Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:03 PM - Many thanks Eve, for visiting, your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

William Kelii Kekaula May 30, 2019 at 8:11 AM A plethora of pleasantries you have presented, whilst drinking my morning coffee--my compliments on your most deservingly POTD Anne-Lise, Aloha William Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:02 PM - William, many thanks for visiting, your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 30, 2019 at 7:36 AM Darling piece Anne-Lise! Congratulations on POTD! xomo! Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2019 at 1:01 PM - Many thanks, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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