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Tolerance

We stayed,

in the storm

all day long, till

the hurricane came, then~~

we left.


Date: 06/05/2019
**Syllable Counter checked 2-3-4-6-2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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June 13, 2019 at 5:01 PM
I liked the way you broke up the lines. It gave the sense of patience, or tolerance, as one experiences the poem.
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