Token of Blessing

Token of Blessing

Simple brass token sits with anticipation,
Like pennies, abandoned in the streets, wait, 
Gracing my desk with reminisce 
Of an inlet crossed by a narrow bridge -
To an island basking in spring air
Or trembling in the nor’easters grip –
Finding open arms of smiles
To rest embraced in hospitality
Warmed in glowing fireside warmth
Before the matin hour, named time,
Calls my song
To enter wide flung doors
Of a white steepled church with a cornerstone
Set before the fife and drum
Rumbled in revolution -
Their steady beat
Still resounding in the tidal winds -
To raise up 
Faith, hope and love found in a spring morning
Of worshipping hearts
Then in a final blessing
Leave echoes of praise, prayer and thanksgiving
While soft winds now tousle words of Godspeed
As two brass tokens, pressed into my palm,
Carry a message of farewell but not good-bye
Each with a mission and a message –
A mystic connection -
One for the bridge toll on my departure
One for my return.

Based on a true story.
4-8-21
Contest: The Last Token
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:41 PM
I love the phrasing and the interconnectedness that is created in your lines. Congrats!
Kauffman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Hi George! Many thanks for your visit and your congratulations. This poem reflects the on-going story of this token. I was hoping the poem would have that quality. Thank you for your words of affirmation. All the best!
Proxenos Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 12:00 PM
This is a beauty Sam, congratulations on your win - a remarkable mystic connection, as two brass tokens were pressed into your palm a message of farewell not goodbye - Love it. I love poems based on a true story. A gem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Perhaps you would enjoy my poem'My Ancestors Escape' - also a true story.
Carber Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Fascinating poem, Sam--congrats on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Hi LJ! The experience that inspired this poem is still very close to my heart. I really wanted that reflected in this write. Thank you for being a part of this continuing story! Blessings of joy to you!
Merryman Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Beautifully written, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Buhagiar Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 1:21 PM
I notice congratulations are due. A brilliant poem, well deserved its placement.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Lovely words, my friend. God bless you again and again. Love this. Love and prayers, Gina
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Your poems are always so stunning, Sam. Brilliantly done! BIG congrats on your win.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations, Dear Sam, on your win with this brilliant poem. It is a remarkable poem on a mystic connection - beautifully expressed with sparkling images! Love and BW ~ Mala
Goldsmith Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day..............
Kauffman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you! Every time I see the token it puts me back into the story with its "mystical connection." Prayers and a hug my friend!
Ibeh Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Wow, this is an amazing piece, Sam! Best of luck in the contest!
Kauffman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Hi Edward! I am so touched by your gracious message. Thank you for your visit, your best wishes and your read of this poem. Sending you blessings of joy!
Rose  Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:11 PM
This was very well written and it had my attention from the very start. Yes indeed mystical connections are rarely broken, spoken like a true believer, Congrats on y our win, and thank you for joining dear Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much Rose. Your wonderful theme brought me back to that moment in time. It holds a very special place in my heart. I got to revisit it all over again - this mystical connection. So grateful for your placement and words of encouragement! Sending you blessings of joy and renewal.
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