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Token of Blessing

Token of Blessing Simple brass token sits with anticipation, Like pennies, abandoned in the streets, wait, Gracing my desk with reminisce Of an inlet crossed by a narrow bridge - To an island basking in spring air Or trembling in the nor’easters grip – Finding open arms of smiles To rest embraced in hospitality Warmed in glowing fireside warmth Before the matin hour, named time, Calls my song To enter wide flung doors Of a white steepled church with a cornerstone Set before the fife and drum Rumbled in revolution - Their steady beat Still resounding in the tidal winds - To raise up Faith, hope and love found in a spring morning Of worshipping hearts Then in a final blessing Leave echoes of praise, prayer and thanksgiving While soft winds now tousle words of Godspeed As two brass tokens, pressed into my palm, Carry a message of farewell but not good-bye Each with a mission and a message – A mystic connection - One for the bridge toll on my departure One for my return. Based on a true story. 4-8-21 Contest: The Last Token Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 4/12/2021 3:41:00 PM
I love the phrasing and the interconnectedness that is created in your lines. Congrats!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2021 10:35:00 AM
Hi George! Many thanks for your visit and your congratulations. This poem reflects the on-going story of this token. I was hoping the poem would have that quality. Thank you for your words of affirmation. All the best!
Date: 4/12/2021 12:00:00 PM
This is a beauty Sam, congratulations on your win - a remarkable mystic connection, as two brass tokens were pressed into your palm a message of farewell not goodbye - Love it. I love poems based on a true story. A gem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Perhaps you would enjoy my poem'My Ancestors Escape' - also a true story.
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Date: 4/11/2021 2:32:00 PM
Fascinating poem, Sam--congrats on your win!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2021 10:38:00 AM
Hi LJ! The experience that inspired this poem is still very close to my heart. I really wanted that reflected in this write. Thank you for being a part of this continuing story! Blessings of joy to you!
Date: 4/11/2021 11:37:00 AM
Beautifully written, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:21:00 PM
I notice congratulations are due. A brilliant poem, well deserved its placement.
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Date: 4/9/2021 12:59:00 PM
Lovely words, my friend. God bless you again and again. Love this. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 4/9/2021 11:32:00 AM
Your poems are always so stunning, Sam. Brilliantly done! BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/9/2021 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Sam, on your win with this brilliant poem. It is a remarkable poem on a mystic connection - beautifully expressed with sparkling images! Love and BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/9/2021 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day..............
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2021 10:40:00 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you! Every time I see the token it puts me back into the story with its "mystical connection." Prayers and a hug my friend!
Date: 4/9/2021 6:06:00 AM
Wow, this is an amazing piece, Sam! Best of luck in the contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2021 10:30:00 AM
Hi Edward! I am so touched by your gracious message. Thank you for your visit, your best wishes and your read of this poem. Sending you blessings of joy!
Date: 4/8/2021 7:11:00 PM
This was very well written and it had my attention from the very start. Yes indeed mystical connections are rarely broken, spoken like a true believer, Congrats on y our win, and thank you for joining dear Sam.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/15/2021 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Rose. Your wonderful theme brought me back to that moment in time. It holds a very special place in my heart. I got to revisit it all over again - this mystical connection. So grateful for your placement and words of encouragement! Sending you blessings of joy and renewal.

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