Toho Studios Presents...

Gabriel groaning:
" Another Godzilla flick!"  ( 3 second delay on sound track.)
Almighty critic. ( Cue theme music and metallic pipe organ roar.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 5, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Really enjoyed the humor in this poem, Gerard. I really wanted to rank it in the contest, but Karen and I felt those poems that didn't adhere to 5-7-5 syllable schemes were not "true" senryus. However, it's a very witty take on the photo and I had a good laugh reading it. Love, Carolyn
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May 2, 2010 at 9:14 AM
LOL FUNN WRITE, ENJOYED
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May 1, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Interesting and fun Senryu. Perhaps if you use "flick" :) instead of "movie" you'll have the right syllable count (7) and it will also rhyme with "critic". Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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