Together We Became One

Waiting, waiting, anticipating Wanting, wanting, loving relations Days, weeks and months the day has arrived To the airport we'll meet desiring our strive To me she walks, closer she becomes My heart now beating like a thousand drums A gentle kiss is shared whilst starry eyes meet For our waiting is over amidst emotional greet To the hotel we travel with small talk and kisses Knowing of what's ahead our desiring of wishes Music now plays into our evening we head As we await our moment loving minds will be read Slow dances, touches, our hands in command My mind now images her body so tanned Champagne now flows, down curves of she As I lap in lust this excitable he Entangled, entwined, we make loving fun For today's our day, together we became one <*>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gildersleeve Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 1:41 PM
James an amazing write my friend. It flowed great right through to the end. A great ending for the two. Warm Smiles, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 5:06 AM
This is a gem James and long may it last . wonderful xx
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 4:16 AM
the visual aspect of this poet James is amazing,, and the poem a classic....
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January 16, 2013 at 9:59 PM
James, wow... did you tie the knot... a beautiful poem... in a way I felt as if I stood there and watched you dance with the women who inspired this poem... always and thank you for everything ...PD
Chircop Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Ow i know from where the inspiration came.You have created a beautiful poem..king of romance.Just awesome.
Dunn Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Well written, well structured and consistant in verse. cheri dunn
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:44 PM
so very beautiful and romantic James! well done...love,Deb
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:43 AM
James a great poem on a special arrival...David
Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Thank you David, she was a special arrival :)
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Very romantic and passionate poem by you James.Lovely read.
Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Many thanks Kash :)
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:39 AM
lovely
Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Sheila :)
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