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Together We Became One

Waiting, waiting, anticipating Wanting, wanting, loving relations Days, weeks and months the day has arrived To the airport we'll meet desiring our strive To me she walks, closer she becomes My heart now beating like a thousand drums A gentle kiss is shared whilst starry eyes meet For our waiting is over amidst emotional greet To the hotel we travel with small talk and kisses Knowing of what's ahead our desiring of wishes Music now plays into our evening we head As we await our moment loving minds will be read Slow dances, touches, our hands in command My mind now images her body so tanned Champagne now flows, down curves of she As I lap in lust this excitable he Entangled, entwined, we make loving fun For today's our day, together we became one <*>

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Date: 1/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
James an amazing write my friend. It flowed great right through to the end. A great ending for the two. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/18/2013 5:06:00 AM
This is a gem James and long may it last . wonderful xx
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Date: 1/18/2013 4:16:00 AM
the visual aspect of this poet James is amazing,, and the poem a classic....
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Date: 1/16/2013 9:59:00 PM
James, wow... did you tie the knot... a beautiful poem... in a way I felt as if I stood there and watched you dance with the women who inspired this poem... always and thank you for everything ...PD
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Date: 1/16/2013 11:00:00 AM
Ow i know from where the inspiration came.You have created a beautiful poem..king of romance.Just awesome.
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Date: 1/14/2013 5:06:00 PM
Well written, well structured and consistant in verse. cheri dunn
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Date: 1/13/2013 12:44:00 PM
so very beautiful and romantic James! well done...love,Deb
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Date: 1/13/2013 9:43:00 AM
James a great poem on a special arrival...David
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James Fraser
Date: 1/13/2013 10:17:00 AM
Thank you David, she was a special arrival :)
Date: 1/13/2013 9:42:00 AM
Very romantic and passionate poem by you James.Lovely read.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/13/2013 10:16:00 AM
Many thanks Kash :)
Date: 1/13/2013 9:39:00 AM
lovely
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James Fraser
Date: 1/13/2013 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Sheila :)

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