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Together We Are Strong - a Dedication

This poem was originally written in Decembe 2015, for a friend who was going through some problems.  Today the same friend is facing many obstacles and I ask people to include her in your prayers.  Thank you.


Oh my distant friend,
let me take care of your broken soul,
let my arms be your shelter - your sanctuary.
The path ahead may seem obscure,
hold my hand, let me guide you home,
don't be nervous, you can rely upon me.

Take my strength, hope and spirituality,
let them be the foundations for stability.
There will be days full of darkness
but you have the power to conduct light
deep within your heart - the will to survive.

Sometimes you will want to give up
but, remember,
I need you, your friendship is so special,
we need you - you brighten up our day,
they need you - your love is irreplaceable.

Together we can sing words of wisdom.
When you are drowning, 
let me be your bridge over troubled water,
I won't pretend - I will stand by you - I get angry too,
lean on me - we all have pain - we all have sorrow.
Any day of the week, I'll be there - you just gotta call.

Be at peace my friend. Together we are strong.

Dedicated to a special friend.

Silent One
Originally written December 2015,
reposted 10 March 2018.

Song references in last stanza are intentional.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:38 PM
A wonderful concern towards another human being Silent, I hope we all have a friend like you in dark days;-)
Tripp Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Lucky gal to have such a kindhearted friend working for her.
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Rhoda, not really work though lol
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 8:45 AM
A poem from the heart is the best gift you can give to someone.. hope your friend finds comfort and strength:) great dedication, SO:)
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Jo, I hope so too..
Thomas Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 8:54 PM
This brought tears to my eyes Silent One. Your heart is a treasure my dear One. She is very fortunate.
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Thank you Shadow.. I am sure many can relate to this..
S     Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 7:56 AM
A friend like you is indeed a special gift and a blessing. Sometimes we just need someone who truly believes in our light and reminds us that it is there. Sometimes we need that special person from whom we can garner strength which we have forgotten we possess in the face of life’s trials. Prayers for your friend Silent One.
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thank you for your sweet words Judy..
Tracy Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Beautiful dedication to your dear friend..prayers sent...best wishes
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you Melissa... Especially for the prayers..
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:21 AM
A heart-felt message to a lucky friend, and you both have my prayers and good wishes. Friends are irreplaceable!
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:40 PM
I agree, thank you Caren..
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Beautiful and so clearly sincere. No truer friend than thee, he treads always Silently.
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Leanne..
Williams Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Wonderful words of comfort Si, your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you in her life, I do hope she gets to see this poem of encouragement and strength. Straight from the heart, and I love it....Maria
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thank you for your kind words Maria..
Ashley Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Such a deep, loving and touching dedication Silent One. Beautiful poetic lines of love, support and encouragement 'you have the power to conduct light deep within your heart - the will to survive' - profound my friend. I love your poem and I love this performance by two of my favorite singers/songwriters, Carole King and James Taylor. I hope your friend finds comfort, strength and peace in your heartfelt words..
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Thank you for your comprehensive feedback, always great to get your viewpoint Susan.. Thank you..
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Very caring and touching depiction..great for her to have a friend like you. A heartfelt dedication, Silent One.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Murray Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 1:33 PM
I also consider you a friend Silent, on the public forums we both share. I feel blessed, even though that really is only the equivalent of touching the hem of your garment. She is lucky to have your support.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Thank you for your kind words Jean..
Turner Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:21 PM
I hope your comforting words bring her peace. You are a good friend. Too bad we can not cure the world of pain and suffering but it is nice to know you try.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you DT, I don't even know if she has read it... Sometimes life can become too much and people just want to hide away, I just hope she returns soon smiling...
B. Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:01 PM
This person is lucky to have a friend like you. I pray all will be okay. It’s so heartbreaking when someone we love is suffering. A beautiful and touching poem.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Thank you Carol, it is hard, especially as this person is suffering from so many different things and trying to be strong..
Rees Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Not everyone is blessed with such special friendship, which must be cherished. Beautifully written.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Peter, your words are very kind..
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 7:58 AM
A special friend is priceless, a great dedication S.O., I hope your friend is ok. Tom
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Tom, so do I, but not heard from her..
Michael Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Really nice...One of my favorite artists too... he exudes peace and love... All the best SO
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Arturo..
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