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I said to my mother, " together we are strong," mom bravely battled with illness for twenty years; but the end came and her life I could not prolong, I made the decision to pull the plug with tears. Mom bravely battled with illness for twenty years, never will I regret spending many years with her; I made the decision to pull the plug with tears, packed my stuff and moved in- and together we were. Never will I regret spending many years with her, we were always friends but became even closer; packed my stuff and moved in- and together we were, mom loved shopping 'till she fainted at the grocer. We were always friends but became even closer, first, a walker, then a wheelchair- then bedridden; mom loved shopping 'till she fainted at the grocer, I became her caregiver- with deep sadness hidden. First, a walker, then a wheelchair- then bedridden, but the end came and her life I could not prolong; I became her caregiver- with deep sadness hidden, I said to my mother, "together we are strong." _________________________ March 12, 2018 Poetry/Pantoum/Together Strong Copyright Protected, ID 18-1003-293-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Together We Are Strong sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 4/5/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congrats Constance on a great poem and win, the pantoum form I find difficult but yours was, smooth flowing and coherent not forced, and with a sad but great story.
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Date: 3/27/2018 6:28:00 PM
Like always awesome write , congratulations on your win, Broken Wings, enjoyed reading .. Have a nice Easter weekend :) Hugs eve
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Date: 3/25/2018 5:11:00 AM
Sad, very touching and inspiring. Congratulation and respect (I believe that is your story). Very well done, Kai
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:59:00 PM
Kai thank you for the congratulations and yes this is my story
Date: 3/24/2018 11:21:00 PM
Very touching poem, BW. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:58:00 PM
Line thank you for the congratulations
Date: 3/24/2018 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt write that I certainly could relate to. My mom passed 6 yrs ago and it was exactly as you described it. It was my turn to be strong but turns out my strength came from her. Well written!
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:57:00 PM
Susan thank you for the congratulations. Yes my strength comes from my mother and my father. I like to think I inherited the best of them
Date: 3/23/2018 2:58:00 PM
Constance, such a beautiful written poem about your mom, sad-yes, but when put into such words- we can't help but to smile. As this reminds me of my mother whom I lost 30 years ago. Congrats & Hugs.. Charlie
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:54:00 PM
Charles thank you for the congratulations.. 30 years means nothing for love is forever
Date: 3/23/2018 12:45:00 AM
Beautifully told BW. Congratulations. Tom
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:52:00 PM
Tom thank you for the beautiful
Date: 3/22/2018 5:24:00 PM
"Deep sadness hidden". As caregiver...you too, needed a caregiver. You suffered more in different way than she. Self sacrifice spares one of guilt, knowing gave your all. Beautiful as poem, and as a model of life well given. Hope joy has returned to your life, happiness follows in time. bbn Big Congrats!
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:51:00 PM
Barbara, thank you. It took a while for anything like joy to return to my life and some days are difficult still
Date: 3/22/2018 3:58:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:49:00 PM
Sun thank you for the congratulations
Date: 3/22/2018 3:39:00 PM
A sad, but beautiful pantoum about your mum, and you know I love my mum and this form, so you did excellent.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:48:00 PM
Silent thank you for the contest and for my awesome placement
Date: 3/13/2018 2:13:00 PM
So sad, but so beautifully expressed, Constance. I can so relate to your poem and your feelings about your dear mother. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:08:00 AM
Sandra thank you for the beautiful. Yes so many have lost a mother, I think this is a pain like no other.
Date: 3/13/2018 1:16:00 PM
- I feel your pain, B.W. - A deep touching poem with real feelings and love - Best wishes in the contest, a winning poem quite sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:07:00 AM
Sun thank you for your support. Someone asked me how long will you grieve?, the answer I did not hesitate..forever!
Date: 3/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
Oh so beautifully and sadly conveyed, Broken Wings, the sense of your deep devotion and your loving mother/daughter bond. Your poetic lines weep with poignancy. Best wishes for a win with your emotional and heartfelt poem..
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:01:00 AM
Susan thank you for the nice comment. Yes my mom and me were very close. I never regretted putting my own life aside to take care of her as she was always there for me all my life

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