Together At Last

They are laughing like naughty children calling out
As they run through the sweet smelling heather
Watching for a gnarled tree trunk to sit and rest about

Looking up into the sky they're wondering whether
The clouds will break and fine rain will fall
Nothing could  mar this moment of joy of being together

They sit close arms entwined shining eyes showing all
The love they have kept hidden all this while
Life has been tough apart as they waited for this  call

No more do they need a watch, time is no longer a trial
Together for always, kisses exchanged, love songs sung
Touching her sweet smelling hair he whispers with a smile

The years have not aged us as we waited for this moment we are forever young

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/27/2014 10:44:00 PM
Excellent write!! A true pleasure to read and admire... Bravo!!!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Robert....Seren
Date: 1/7/2013 12:20:00 AM
Beautiful write!
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Date: 1/7/2013 1:59:00 AM
Oops typo. For stopping
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Date: 1/7/2013 1:58:00 AM
Thank you Vesna forbstopping by and commenting........Seren
Date: 1/6/2013 1:50:00 PM
Oh, so cool. Time "together at last". Wonderful. That's what we all wish with our loved one. Enjoyed!
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Date: 1/6/2013 2:51:00 PM
thank you Toquyen but this couple had to wait years to get together. Thats what i was trying to convey. .....Seren
Date: 1/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
Seren yep much better....David
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Date: 1/6/2013 2:50:00 PM
smiles
Date: 1/6/2013 8:38:00 AM
Hi Seren good choice of form, I like...David soup mail..
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:17:00 PM
very beautifully written dear Seren :) have wonderful weekend my sweet friend <3 luv and hugs far off
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a comment........Seren
Date: 1/5/2013 11:01:00 PM
This is really lovely. I can feel the love and warmth in these words
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Date: 1/6/2013 1:13:00 AM
thank you Erin, so pleased you stopped by...Seren
Date: 1/5/2013 10:24:00 PM
Hi Seren, this is really good, enjoyed it a lot. Loved the last line. Rollo
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Date: 1/5/2013 10:33:00 PM
For*me
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/5/2013 10:32:00 PM
Thanks Rollo trying out a new form or me. Glad you left a comment lol........Seren
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