Together

Away from life’s whims of bustle and rush 
Not even the wind will brittle shells brush 
The bird’s eggs rest peacefully on their nest
Work of fibres at their best.
(What in the world can be more beautiful?)
The value of a filament cannot best be told 
Otherwise its stick of fire will soon be drowned in the dew.


Our pot is broken:
Our world is split in seven pieces;
Some greater, larger and some left unspoken.
The black clouds that welcome the rains of the month 
Is the stench breath of the cannons mouth?
And to think our worst fears are manmade meteors from the sky
Would forever be one pathetic lie.

Ebony and ivory together  
Can’t you hear the sounds of piano keys?
 Like the singing free spirited birds that will always fly.

Oh mankind! Oh mankind!! Oh mankind!!!
Do you not feel the chill in the uncaring night? 
In our minds the tale of the broom
Mummy earth still rewinds
“A stick will only prick dirt through your eyes
 But together they can clean the room “
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 3, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Trevor,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
George   Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Cleaverly woven with a valuable life lesson at the end. Thank you for sharing, Trevor. Lainie
Nutter Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 3:30 PM
congrats on being featured this week have a blessed new year!
Mason Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Hope we find a way to save our world ... smile ... beautiful writing here, Trevor and an excellent selection to be a feature of the week here at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!!
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Trevor. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2009 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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December 10, 2009 at 3:53 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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September 18, 2009 at 11:54 AM
well written and though provoking poem. Congratulations on your feature. Krista
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September 16, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations, Trevor, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It captivates the mind. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
Omololu Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 3:16 AM
artistic and beautiful!
Moreno Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 1:54 AM
Trevor, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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September 14, 2009 at 3:29 PM
congrats on being a featured artist!
Adeite Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 8:08 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Trevor. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Trevor, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 20, 2009 at 9:17 AM
Nice poem i must saysimple and clear.
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April 8, 2009 at 4:14 AM
good
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