Jenna Logan Poet Verse

Toes In the Sand

Sunlight faintly broke through the clouds
Waves churned with loud clangor on the sea
Fog flowed in a winding river down to the shore
I was lost in pensive thoughts, toes dredging sand

I was lost in pensive thoughts, toes dredging sand
Fog flowed in a winding river down to the shore
Waves churned with loud clangor on the sea
Sunlight faintly broke through the clouds




August 14, 2020
Mirror Mirror Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  John Lawless

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Jeanne Mcgee August 23, 2020 at 2:35 PM A lonely mood set to the clang of the sea...well done mirror Jenna, congrats!

Jan Allison August 21, 2020 at 12:40 PM what a beautifully descriptive poem Jenna, i too like the toes dredging sand line:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan August 22, 2020 at 11:22 AM Hi Jan. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Paul Callus August 21, 2020 at 3:52 AM Lovely and descriptive, Jenna. I can relate to those sand dredging toes! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Jenna Logan August 21, 2020 at 6:25 AM Thanks so very much, Paul.

Sam Kauffman August 20, 2020 at 9:44 PM A wonderful picture of a day at the beach, Jenna. I was there with you building sand castles! Congratulations on your winning placement! Blessings. Jenna Logan August 21, 2020 at 6:25 AM Thanks, Sam. We'll have to visit the beach again. lol

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2020 at 4:15 PM Wonderfully descriptive, Jenna. BIG congrats for the win. Jenna Logan August 20, 2020 at 9:14 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Silent One August 15, 2020 at 9:05 AM We have all been there and pondered such things... I do it almost every day Jenna Logan August 16, 2020 at 4:06 AM Sometimes I get lost in daydreams, or drift off in my thoughts. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham August 15, 2020 at 1:36 AM That was me in the week lol, but you're right, it's so relaxing and your mind wanders. Tom Jenna Logan August 16, 2020 at 4:06 AM It really does, Tom. Thanks for reading me.

Richard Evans August 14, 2020 at 4:16 PM This poem takes me back to my Southern California days. Toes in the sand, shoes in my hand, pretty girl smiling at me. Jenna Logan August 16, 2020 at 4:05 AM It sounds like you have some great memories, Ricky. Thank you for leaving your thoughts.

John Gondolf August 14, 2020 at 9:14 AM When I saw your poem title I was reminded of the Zach Brown song "Toes" except I think in the song lyrics his toes are in the water and his ass is in the sand. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs, John Jenna Logan August 14, 2020 at 12:15 PM Hi John, and thank you. It made me think of the Norah Jones song with the line, 'my feet don't touch the water.'