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Toes In the Sand

Sunlight faintly broke through the clouds Waves churned with loud clangor on the sea Fog flowed in a winding river down to the shore I was lost in pensive thoughts, toes dredging sand I was lost in pensive thoughts, toes dredging sand Fog flowed in a winding river down to the shore Waves churned with loud clangor on the sea Sunlight faintly broke through the clouds August 14, 2020 Mirror Mirror Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Lawless

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2020 2:35:00 PM

A lonely mood set to the clang of the sea...well done mirror Jenna, congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2020 12:40:00 PM

what a beautifully descriptive poem Jenna, i too like the toes dredging sand line:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 11:22:00 AM

Hi Jan. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2020 3:52:00 AM

Lovely and descriptive, Jenna. I can relate to those sand dredging toes! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Paul.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/20/2020 9:44:00 PM

A wonderful picture of a day at the beach, Jenna. I was there with you building sand castles! Congratulations on your winning placement! Blessings.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. We'll have to visit the beach again. lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2020 4:15:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive, Jenna. BIG congrats for the win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/20/2020 9:14:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Silent One

Date: 8/15/2020 9:05:00 AM

We have all been there and pondered such things... I do it almost every day

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/16/2020 4:06:00 AM

Sometimes I get lost in daydreams, or drift off in my thoughts. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2020 1:36:00 AM

That was me in the week lol, but you're right, it's so relaxing and your mind wanders. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/16/2020 4:06:00 AM

It really does, Tom. Thanks for reading me.

Ricky Muse

Date: 8/14/2020 4:16:00 PM

This poem takes me back to my Southern California days. Toes in the sand, shoes in my hand, pretty girl smiling at me.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/16/2020 4:05:00 AM

It sounds like you have some great memories, Ricky. Thank you for leaving your thoughts.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/14/2020 9:14:00 AM

When I saw your poem title I was reminded of the Zach Brown song "Toes" except I think in the song lyrics his toes are in the water and his ass is in the sand. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2020 12:15:00 PM

Hi John, and thank you. It made me think of the Norah Jones song with the line, 'my feet don't touch the water.'