Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Toddler's Thrill

That toy train; those two tanks.

Tell Teddy Thomas thanks.

Those thoughtful tokens three

to totally thrill thee -

treasure them, tiny tyke.

Tomorrow –the toy trike!


July 1, 2022 
for Angela Tune's Begin With A Letter Poetry Contest

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Michelle Faulkner July 21, 2022 at 7:19 PM This could have come from a classic children's book, so whimsical, should do well in the contest!

Ann Foster July 15, 2022 at 2:25 PM This was great fun. Well done. Ann

Bill Baker July 4, 2022 at 4:09 PM Interestinf form, well done, Andrea. Another fine contest entry! Have a fun day my friend! Bill

Silpika Kalita July 3, 2022 at 1:19 PM Praiseworthy alliterative rhyme with much reflection... Silpika

Beryl Edmonds July 2, 2022 at 7:22 PM That’s really good Andrea, totally perfect for the contest… Belle

Jennifer Walker July 2, 2022 at 12:02 PM I felt like I was reading tongue twisters. Such a master of contest challenges.

Robert Gorelick July 1, 2022 at 4:29 PM I wish the tykes a hoola hoop heaven and a slinky summer! Brilliant Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2022 at 11:08 AM cute reply!!

Michael Tor July 1, 2022 at 3:27 PM Exceptional writing Andrea. Your talent shines in this one. Blessings your way my Dear... Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2022 at 11:07 AM thanks!

Karen Jones July 1, 2022 at 12:20 PM Brilliant write in perfect form! Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2022 at 11:08 AM Thanks, Karen

L Milton Hankins July 1, 2022 at 12:01 PM Ah, this is both cute and clever, Andrea. Nice job. And, I might add, these are never as easy as they appear to be. Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2022 at 11:07 AM they are pretty difficult to do them in a way that makes sense with decent sentence structure that is also cohesive.