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Toddler's Thrill

That toy train; those two tanks. Tell Teddy Thomas thanks. Those thoughtful tokens three to totally thrill thee - treasure them, tiny tyke. Tomorrow –the toy trike! July 1, 2022 for Angela Tune's Begin With A Letter Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/21/2022 7:19:00 PM
This could have come from a classic children's book, so whimsical, should do well in the contest!
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Date: 7/15/2022 2:25:00 PM
This was great fun. Well done. Ann
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Date: 7/4/2022 4:09:00 PM
Interestinf form, well done, Andrea. Another fine contest entry! Have a fun day my friend! Bill
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Date: 7/3/2022 1:19:00 PM
Praiseworthy alliterative rhyme with much reflection... Silpika
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Date: 7/2/2022 7:22:00 PM
That’s really good Andrea, totally perfect for the contest… Belle
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Date: 7/2/2022 12:02:00 PM
I felt like I was reading tongue twisters. Such a master of contest challenges.
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Date: 7/1/2022 4:29:00 PM
I wish the tykes a hoola hoop heaven and a slinky summer! Brilliant
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/2/2022 11:08:00 AM
cute reply!!
Date: 7/1/2022 3:27:00 PM
Exceptional writing Andrea. Your talent shines in this one. Blessings your way my Dear...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/2/2022 11:07:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 7/1/2022 12:20:00 PM
Brilliant write in perfect form!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/2/2022 11:08:00 AM
Thanks, Karen
Date: 7/1/2022 12:01:00 PM
Ah, this is both cute and clever, Andrea. Nice job. And, I might add, these are never as easy as they appear to be.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/2/2022 11:07:00 AM
they are pretty difficult to do them in a way that makes sense with decent sentence structure that is also cohesive.