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Inspired by Panagiota Romios' haiku, 'Beaming Joy,' posted today...

Coffee's aroma Wafts past my nostrils...aroused Like a pied piper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/18/2019 2:05:00 PM
Good haiku, Glad yours get comments Mine! hah! Nah,but that's cool with me. It must be a lousy Haiku, may pull it, Appreciate you giving me some credit. What a mensch! Pr Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 7:59:00 PM
Yours is not a lousy haiku at all. It's just the luck of the draw on comments sometimes. Some of my best writes get one or two comments at most. Those are the ones that are actually hanging on peoples' walls for inspiration. Go figure!! Hang in there, my friend. Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/18/2019 12:44:00 PM
the fresh aroma of coffee always draws me in....good write :) hugs
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Date: 8/18/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! :) gw
Date: 8/18/2019 12:32:00 PM
Mmm nothing beats that beautiful smell of freshly brewed coffee.
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Date: 8/18/2019 1:01:00 PM
That's right. Nothing so enticing. Thanks, Tom. ~ gw
Date: 8/18/2019 10:18:00 AM
Nose follows the aroma...pallet taste the beans...mind perks up...Nice one
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Date: 8/18/2019 1:01:00 PM
Yup. We do the bunny hop right over to the coffee machine. :) gw
Date: 8/18/2019 9:49:00 AM
Coffee is my all time temptation :D
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Date: 8/18/2019 1:00:00 PM
Me, too. And a little melted chocolate in there to. Mmmmm. Thanks, Swetha. :) gw
Date: 8/18/2019 9:48:00 AM
I can smell the coffee! Well done. Have a great day :)
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Date: 8/18/2019 12:59:00 PM
Alright, Heidi! What number cup are we on now?! LOL. Thanks, gw

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