Today the Sun Rose Different

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Romans 12:2 New Living Translation 2 Don’t copy the behavior and customs of this world, but let God transform you into a new person by changing the way you think. Then you will learn to know God’s will for you, which is good and pleasing and perfect Sunday morning Humans sleep Nature awakens rose intersperses cobalt cloud-streaked blue sky.... cooing of the doves Roosters crow Welcome new day Other songbirds come to life A stillness Has settled Not a leaf moves Sun slowly moves higher Peace Palatable Covers me with serenity My spirit takes flight Bumble Bee Feeds among the blossoms A crow caws Out a warning Or a call to awake The Pines Sentinel like With raised limbs Whisper praises to God Thank you, God For your Love This time on the porch And your creation Amen A poem coming soon. Finis'

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Terrell Martin

Date: 8/10/2022 5:20:00 AM

Sara, wonderful free verse thoughts about the dawning of yet another Sunday morning sunrise. Loved the individual lines: "Roosters crow, A stillness, Peace." This is a perfect example of why we read and write poetry. Write On, Terry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2022 6:12:00 AM

Thank you, Terry for the encouragement and reason to continue writing. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 8/8/2022 9:03:00 PM

"The Pines/ Sentinel like/ With raised limbs/ Whisper praises to God" A poem of cheer and thankfulness !Enjoyed it, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 4:22:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. Your comment added a new dimension to my work. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 8/8/2022 3:16:00 PM

Hello ,Mrs. Sarai'am glad to hear you,a lovely poem!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 4:20:00 AM

Thank you, Mulu. Your review was uplifting. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/8/2022 1:29:00 AM

A series of lovely observations. Most of all we need God. Alas a small island converted by St Paul has lost most of its morality. I feel ashamed.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2022 2:17:00 PM

Yes, I remember reading about Paul's trip to Malta. He plus some others did some missionary work all in that area and I wonder how much is Christian today. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2022 8:11:00 PM

Your porch sounds like a little piece of Paradise. :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2022 2:13:00 PM

Gershon, It has had its moments. It needs cleaning and a few other things to make it the best, but life is not offering solutions to those problems. Sara