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Today Is Just Another Day

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Today, I am neither a Druid nor am I human. But just a creature of the cosmos exploring. Today, the sun may not appear, I do not fear. Today, the clouds may fall heavy on my soul. Saturated, I find no fire to dry my thoughts. Today, my feelings are disguised as tenuous geese. Gaggling at one another to compete for dominion. Today, I am lost, but found my own ground. Though floorless it is, I float with every step. Today, I have realised, that I’m not the only one. Who has seen beyond this veil that we call life? Today, is just another day to be grasped in some way. After today comes the night, and that’s another flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/17/2017 6:39:00 PM
Wow! A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. Amazing write! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:37:00 PM
White Wolf,while reading your poem, I got sweep up in it. I like the words all flow together. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/10/2017 9:15:00 AM
Today brings promise of great change. Even though invisible, seeds of what is to come germinate in the placidity of just another day. A thought your work has planted in my mind.
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Date: 8/9/2017 10:36:00 PM
This was beautifully penned; the imagery is wonderful and you've really brought it all to life.
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:27:00 PM
Very philosophical with allegorical overtones that leads one to ponder! An excellent writing artfully developed with deep meanings my fiend, WW! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 8/8/2017 11:56:00 PM
I concur with the other comments. A truly fine write, very descriptive and thought provoking. Regards, Craig
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Date: 8/8/2017 11:46:00 AM
Outstanding my friend... I think therefore I am
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Date: 8/8/2017 9:17:00 AM
Loved the form, wonderful piece WW, check line six.
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:47:00 AM
I am uplifted by this write, such bold and strong imagery . I love it. Thanx for sharing.. smiles *Ron*
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Date: 8/8/2017 7:40:00 AM
One does not always need eyes to see. Your poetry turns an ordinary day into something much more, WW. ;-)
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