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A picture that whets the appetite Lightly browned toast standing upright Hemmed in on each side by jarred jam Glasses filled with honey thus far Upon a wooden table sits A treat fit for nobility Alive with beauty sits the meal Upon the table fair The lightly browned toast bids welcome As does the jam light as air Mother could make poverty seem Like grand six course dinners Homemade bread, jams, and jellies No chance of getting thinner Sundays' meals were always special There might be fresh peach jam On buttered toast with honey But never any lamb Sponsor: Giorgio A.V. Contest: Ekphrasis Contest 101 Written in April 2015 Finis'

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Date: 5/7/2015 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:55:00 AM
Sara, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/5/2015 6:10:00 PM
Lovey poem and interpretation, Sara. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:04:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sara
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Date: 5/5/2015 3:15:00 PM
Helloooo Sara!!!!! Your goodness flows into your words in the lines here. Loved your beautiful poem,, Congrats on a great win!!!love always to you.. and a Big hug! missed you
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Date: 5/5/2015 2:57:00 PM
SARA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2015 4:41:00 AM
Brilliant ending alluding to the poverty you mention earlier. Excellent ekphrasis for your own choice of pictures. This is a great Mother's Day piece about a mother who treats her family as the royalty that they are.
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:43:00 AM
It sounds good Sara, I can do without the lamb... LOL...Linda
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Date: 4/10/2015 4:48:00 PM
You've made me hungry...a wonderful poem, indeed.
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Date: 4/10/2015 1:50:00 AM
How sweet a write !! Moms can really turn u fat with affectionate cooking,, gl in contest Sara!
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Date: 4/9/2015 11:18:00 PM
sara, the third part is the best. Stay with the humor. I love it!!
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Date: 4/9/2015 8:38:00 PM
Simple everyday foods like bread can be enjoyed equally by both the rich and poor... Peanut butter and jelly on toast is still a favorite of mine. I enjoyed this great poem just as much. Very nicely written, Sara!
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Date: 4/9/2015 10:50:00 AM
I agree with the others Sara - sometimes less is more - I feel hungry now - grrrr! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/9/2015 10:10:00 AM
Sara, even in its unfinished state your poem is beautifully written and thanks for visiting my poetry
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