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crumpled robes and a mangled hanger~ turning blood into wine ***

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/9/2021 9:04:00 AM

Truly AMAZING Maureen!!! Your new nom de plume is off to a GREAT start. Thank you Maureen.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/5/2021 3:04:00 AM

You insolent rib, I so have to try that out on the next female that give me jip, and wait for the response, brilliant as ever, love it, Mo . . . ; )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2021 10:47:00 AM

Hugs and giggles! And thank You Lovely! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/4/2021 11:30:00 AM

A return to the wire hangar is unforgiveable. Where is Clint Eastwood to, "Hang 'em High"? The Texas Legislature should be imprisoned for Senate Bill 8, as should the Supreme Court as they lack the ability to identify an Hate Crime when they see it!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2021 10:46:00 AM

I love Clint. The Satanic Temple is bringing it to the supreme court for infringing on their religious right to abortion, maybe they’ll have some luck. ~xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/4/2021 4:16:00 AM

This one could evoke disturbing imagery in the mind Super Mo, depending on the mood of the reader, I'm already disturbed so I'm fine with it, either way it's quite a surreal description, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/4/2021 7:07:00 AM

I’m pretty disturbed too. My sister lives in Texas, I find it disturbing that I am grateful she is raising boys and not girls. I’m disturbed that my feminist roots are pushing through pavement again. Thank you, mo than you could know David. xomo