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To You I Do Belong a Collaboration With Fj Thomas

My mind can spin a thousand tales, yet none that measure to you My words can turn a thousand heads but can't express my hearts view I just can't seem to find the words that express how I feel for you Perhaps it's out of fear that you'll turn and run away or perhaps I am unsure of how or what to say so I guess I'll take a leap of faith and let my feelings show I watch the beauty you display through the strength and love you've shown Taking my heart further, lifting my thoughts higher than they've ever known The disheveled puzzle that was my life you so gently rearranged you helped me to forget what was lost and focus on what I've gained And, when life wears me down, erodes the walls that have kept me strong you fortify my spirit saying, please do not lose heart my love because forever to you I do belong

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Carole Duet

Date: 4/19/2019 10:23:00 PM

Beautiful, Edward. It's a lucky woman who receives such a sincerely thoughtful and loving poem.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/24/2018 8:21:00 AM

Hi Edward, this is a wonderful collaboration you have done with F.J. This is such a beautiful piece, written by two talented poets, or let me say one poet, as i could not tell who wrote what. I so enjoyed the read and the imagery expressed. A fave. Have a wonderful wednesday. Your friend....Mike.

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/18/2018 11:52:00 AM

What a beautiful collaboration... Insure I enjoyed the read! Hugs and smiles :)

Edward Mccall
Date: 4/18/2018 10:36:00 PM

Hi Akkina how are you doing? thank you for your lovely comment I'm so happy you enjoyed it your comments always make me smile. Hug and smiles back my dear friend. Edward.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2018 11:58:00 AM

aww such an uplifting poem Flo and Edward, the words flow so beautifully and i can't guess who who wrote which stanza. When you find that right person to support you through good times and bad you know you have met your soul mate:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2018 10:39:00 AM

I sincerely hope you write with Flo again, two awesome poets with pens of gold:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Mccall
Date: 4/12/2018 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan for such a beautiful comment. It was a joy to write with FJ she made it easy to blend my verses with hers. Thank you again Jan and hugs back to you. Edward. {:-)

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/11/2018 11:44:00 AM

The pleasure was mine Edward. You are only the second person I've ever done a collaboration with. Thank you :)

Edward Mccall
Date: 4/12/2018 10:07:00 AM

Good morning FJ thank you again for writing with me and for being so understanding. Perhaps we can work together again in the future. Edward. {:-)

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/11/2018 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Jan! MUWAAA

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2018 11:59:00 AM

Your pens flow so beautifully together Flo, a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx