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To Whom It Concerns

She is sitting on the end of her bed, her head is in her hands. The tears fall from her face. She thinks to herself what could have i done to deserved this? Her phone rings, its a text message from her. It takes all she has to read it. "I found another girl to love and i hope you can get over me" Is what she reads. The words cut her deeper. She runs to the bathroom grabs the blade. As she is about to cut her writs the door opens, its her mom. She grabs the blade from her hand and throws it. She grabs her little girl and begins to hug her and cries. She asked what has come to this? Her little girl answers and says When hasn't it came to this? -cheyenne Lynn carr

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Date: 4/16/2016 3:02:00 PM
cheyenne, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cheyenne. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:45:00 PM
Heartfelt piece Cheyenne, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 9:14:00 AM
sometime people get caught up in sadness and meloncholy due to others controlling their emotions, this is a form of abuse, take your power back and get out of that abusive pattern before it gets worse, good write, very disturbing
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:06:00 PM
sad, desperate, person, resolve to not let others control your life, youare better than that!! penned well!
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:40:00 PM
Interesting write here about love that has gone wrong. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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