To Whom-

Let's sit together and talk like we used to. . .
when we were young; your voice was like a bass drum-
pumping through my brain. You were a white noise to
block out the rest of the world. 

I can never remember what we talked about but
I remember the silence when we expelled all our stories and fears.
Closer, you came, and I heard the sound of locusts flying-
their beating wings, drowning out my vision.

I was senseless and clung to you, stable and strong.
There was a deep rent in your soul- I saw it one day.
And for a moment, I fell in love with you. I felt strong
where you were weak.

I wanted desperately to be the one. Am I beautiful
enough? to fill the void, the gap, the space? 
When you look at me: you see my shell,
pretty and useless, with soft hands, soft lips. 

You never did find out if I was beautiful. We stopped
talking long before it ever came up. And I-
never healed the part of you I loved the most.
Where do we go from here?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/9/2014 4:16:00 PM
Wow, deep honesty in this great poem, Daisy. The expression of happiness and sadness is created amazingly. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:44:00 AM
Nice write well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 12/12/2013 9:33:00 PM
wonderful poem!
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Date: 11/29/2013 9:36:00 AM
I stand amazed at your work! Can we ever possess the right to be loved? 7 stars
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/29/2013 11:38:00 AM
Oh, and thanks for your kind comments and rating! I really appreciate it. I'd love to read some more of your work, too.
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/29/2013 11:37:00 AM
I guess not- we can't ever posses the right to be loved. But it's so easy for me to love others, and that is enough.
Date: 11/27/2013 7:31:00 AM
good work! guess that why u r number one
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/27/2013 3:09:00 PM
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