Mike Gentile Poet Personification

To Weave And Thread

Oh inspiration, leave me not
                            On wings departed for the sun
For you and I are were such good friends
                    When we were standing, still as one

If not for you, the turquoise skies
                           Would hover just a simple blue
And flowers would of course, still be
                             Yet not of such a fragrant hue

The faded lines of tedium
              Become brand-new when you’re around
But oh, the doldrums dominate  
                       When you no longer can be found

Oh inspiration, be my muse 
                               Awaken you old sleepy head
With crayon candied thoughts to flow
             And winsome words to weave and thread

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Linda Alice Fowler March 31, 2024 at 1:17 PM Fabulous rhyming Mike. :) Mike Gentile April 1, 2024 at 5:46 AM Thank you so much Linda !!

Michael Tor March 21, 2024 at 1:49 PM Mike loved your theme. Just full of truth and you put it into words. Really enjoyed reading and a POTD contender. Thanks for posting my friend... Mike Gentile March 22, 2024 at 6:19 AM Thank you so much Michael, happy Friday!!

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2024 at 10:12 AM What a plaintive call to your muse, Mike! To stand together. To be aware of the gift of your muse. These lines are so heartfelt. I enjoyed this very much. Blessings of inspirations to you! Mike Gentile March 22, 2024 at 6:19 AM Thank you so muchSam, happy Friday !

Heidi Sands March 21, 2024 at 6:13 AM I can relate to this poem as I search for my missing inspiration . Great poem Mike . Happy Thursday :) Mike Gentile March 22, 2024 at 6:19 AM Thank you Heidi, I hope that you have been well, happy Friday xxoo

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2024 at 11:08 AM I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I love the ending...  Our muse has a mind of it's own. I wish you would write more. I love reading your writes.... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away........................ Mike Gentile March 21, 2024 at 5:34 AM Paula, you are so kind, thank you xxoo

Gershon Wolf March 9, 2024 at 7:35 PM This is just so lovely, Mike. Sometimes I think that almost every poem you post could easily be POTD. This is a fine example. Happy weekend, Gershon Mike Gentile March 10, 2024 at 4:34 AM GW, thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot! Happy Sunday!!

Silent One March 3, 2024 at 12:41 PM This one weaves and threads in a great rhythm, like you have just knitted a lovely warm jumper.. loved it my friend.. Mike Gentile March 10, 2024 at 4:39 AM Thank you so much, Silent One! I appreciate your lovely words!!

Victor Buhagiar February 29, 2024 at 1:53 AM My muse has long been dead. No solution in vista. Mike Gentile March 1, 2024 at 1:36 PM Thank you Victor, I hope your muse returns soon!!!

Jan Allison February 27, 2024 at 1:17 PM I'm afraid I'm reduced to writing poop and risque humour these days lol. To be brutally honest Mike I got fed up of reading snide remarks about people writing poop so I'm not posting on soup but working on my next book, hugs Jan xx Jan Allison February 27, 2024 at 2:49 PM thanks Mike, you have kicked me into reality I AM going to post a poop one and I won't let the bully win, i was always grateful to you for suggesting Fonda Cox to be a drag Queen - she features in 3 poems in my giggle a day book lol :-) hugs Jan xx Mike Gentile February 27, 2024 at 2:31 PM I’m so sorry to hear that, folks need to chill!! I enjoy risqué, I’m gonna soup mail one to you!!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 27, 2024 at 11:30 AM Mike, your poem is a captivating ode to inspiration. Your words beautifully express the deep connection between creativity and inspiration, showing us of its transformative power. The imagery you evoke is amazing and enchanting, drawing me, the reader into a world where inspiration breathes life into the ordinary. This is a piece of artistry at its best. - Blessings, Daniel Mike Gentile February 27, 2024 at 12:13 PM Daniel, thank you so much for your very kind words!!