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To Thwart Obedience

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Spring has sprung and won't ever ignore. Endeavor while the water is provided once more. At the point when we come in, we will restore. It starts rapidly and afterward settles bore. Fit all over with a few waves, dutiful look wore. What's more, in odd areas striking the core. Visit the theater on the riverside near the shore. written: August 12, 2021 A Brian Strand rime me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/13/2021 6:41:00 AM

Some of these poetry form are quite new to me. They are a wonderful way of expanding a writer. Well done Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Delice. You are too kind, but I really appreciate your reading and your thoughts

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/13/2021 5:27:00 AM

Wonderful imagery in monorhymes--well done, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 6:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay; I appreciate your kind words. Have a great weekend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/12/2021 11:32:00 PM

Monorhyme can be enchanting like this one. Well done.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 3:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor your kind words are so much appreciated. Blessings and best regards

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/12/2021 8:35:00 PM

Fine writing, Lasaad. I agree with William below: GIVE US MORE! Monorhymes are always interesting.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/13/2021 3:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Milton, I like Monorhyme form and won’t hesitate to write more of it….// Blessings and kindest regards

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/12/2021 7:14:00 PM

Lasaad, encore! I found monorhymes a challenging form, nonetheless, I am glad you found its ease my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 7:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, William. Your kind words are so uplifting and motivating for me. I appreciate your reading and commenting. Blessings and kindest regards.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2021 6:35:00 PM

great job with monorhyme, lasaad!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 7:04:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Andrea, have a nice evening.