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To the Stars

I have some important questions About the quality of what we “believe” Are our concepts of who we are Rooted in our lack of questioning? The awesome fear of ridicule The blistering pressure to conform The inevitable path of least resistance And the comfort that it affords Suppose we had always been told That our savior is Julius Caesar Would our religious ceremonies now conclude With, “He came, he saw, he conquered”? Are we unknowingly in lockstep Like dancers in a music video? And is the comfort of being “right” Worth this atrophy to our souls? Like a distorted photo negative Shaping our most repeated stories Is our perception that we are broken The fuel for what we “believe”? As goldfish have known only water And content in their little jar If our minds weren’t pointed in the wrong direction Would we have already been to the stars?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/29/2012 8:32:00 AM
Thought provoking write - congratulations on your feature this week.
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Date: 3/28/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2012 9:37:00 AM
Yes! And goldfish will grow in proportion to their tank, Someone once told me. I Like your questioning attitude, gets one in trouble with fanatics, though. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 3/26/2012 6:52:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on feature............Patrick
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:32:00 AM
The poetry here at the Soup today is so diverse. It was a pleasure to read yours David. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to continue writing always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:29:00 AM
At some point in time we all have to decide for ourselves what we believe and accept..You have chosen a very good and relevant topic on which to write..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:28:00 AM
this was nice and I have enjoyed reading your write today.. cory
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:29:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your most creative write David.. simply elegant with great imagery luv.. stars are one of my fav things..too..
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