Anu Nayak Poet Sonnet

To the Smile-Hexsonnetta

To The Smile - Hexsonnetta 
                     

Enchanting curl of lips
Soft n'pink with rosy tips
Wet dew of honey flows
lustrous pearls' silver glows
Sweet taste of nectar sips
Fountain of healing snows

Arms open flight in air....
Happy embrace as you stare
Naked feet, wet grass-bed
Senses soothe as you spread
Frown n' folly you repair
Life's tender charms you fed

Ambiguous or lost roads
your car parks n' stress goes!!


© Anulaxmi Nayak,2015
For Andrea's Hexsonnetta contest
Date: 20th August 2015

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Casarah Nance August 30, 2015 at 6:43 AM This plays with the romantic senses, beautifully done! Anu Nayak August 30, 2015 at 6:49 AM Dear Casarah, thank you very much:-):-):-) your visit and words means a lot to me......love n' hugs, Anu:-)

Neva Romaine August 24, 2015 at 2:05 PM Hey Anulaxmi, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely sonnet - so well written and with such beautiful imagery. Well done and best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva Anu Nayak August 24, 2015 at 2:17 PM Dear Neva, thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem and for your appreciative words....means a lot to me..thanks again....love, Anu:-)

Emile Pinet August 21, 2015 at 1:37 PM You have a good sense of rhyme and rhythm and can put feelings into your word choices. The poem is structured well and flows smoothly. Emile. Anu Nayak August 21, 2015 at 9:18 PM Dear Emile, thank you so much for your visitto my poem and your words of appreciation:-)I am motivated to write when I Get supportive comments and i feel so happy....thank you again.love, Anu:-)

Constance La France August 21, 2015 at 7:28 AM Anul, oh so beautifully penned, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, lover of writing . . . Anu Nayak August 21, 2015 at 7:35 AM Dear Broken wings, thank you very much dear for your kind visit and your valuable words and 7!...feeling honoured....thanks again dear...love, Anu:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 20, 2015 at 12:20 PM Very tender and romantic. Marvelous images that unfold as the poem progresses. Good luck, dear Anulaxmi! Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 12:35 PM Dear Demetrios, thank you so much for stopping to visit my poem and leave your valuable feedback...thanks again...love, Anu:-)

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 8:34 AM The lovely imagery made me smile Anu good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 8:39 AM oh...sorry for the wrong paste dear Jan..thank you for the feedback dear....wow...if it made you smile i am more than happy dear!......love n' hugs, Anu:-) Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 8:36 AM Dear Ravi, Thank you for the feedback:-)

Ravi Sathasivam August 20, 2015 at 7:51 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 8:40 AM Dear Ravi, thank you for the feedback:-)....love, Anu:-)