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To the Simple Girl

You don't always wear mascara But there's something about your eyes Your makeup doesn't scare us Something simple is your surprise You can't hide what God gave you Under those shirt and pants And though you didn't bother There is still something about your hair Your not afraid of working The fixings of here and there You never find me watching But sometimes I do stare With you I find the deepest love I could ever have Because your simply beautiful Without the paint and all that jazz

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Karen Jones

Date: 9/25/2023 7:31:00 PM

FAVED! OMG looooooved this. You are so romantic!

Curie Stark

Date: 8/23/2023 11:21:00 PM

Simple always doesn't mean no makeup and no self care It can also mean I'm content with what I have I find solace in my own stare Doing work ,doing care You poem is Beautiful.i fell in love with that simple girl too

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/24/2022 8:48:00 PM

I fall into the simple girl who does not need all the makeup and jazz. God made me good just as I am. lol Lovely write and especially like how you find her lovely just as she is. love phyl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/12/2015 3:25:00 PM

Interesting write. Inner beauty shines. Thanks for your visit to my bribe poem. It's obviously done in jest, so no need for you to worry...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2014 10:25:00 PM

ahhh, this is so sweet. Here's to the simple girl!! There is a little bit of her in many of us girlies. I really enjoy this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2014 10:35:00 AM

Ahh!! Such a romantic work for the one that you love..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..I live where there the Canada Geese fly in their V formation over my home every fall and every spring..They are migratory and go north to raise their young in the spring..It is usually around March or so before they go but they know what they are doing..I guess they are going to take so extra layovers on the way..Sara

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2014 6:53:00 PM

Nice ending Situation. No need in hiding the gift. Happy valentines. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2014 12:05:00 PM

Happy valentines, from one simple look to another. How charming to be attracted to the natural look, then all the colors make-up can buy. My boss once told me, he found the simple girls more interesting, than the ones beautified for looks. hugs... LINDA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2014 11:44:00 AM

A lovely and very sweet romantic poem